The Hatchet

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burst of hatchet aroma of pine woods in winter.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2022 4:41:00 AM

A stunning image of gathering firewood to keep out the chill of winter. Tom

Valsa George

Date: 1/14/2022 3:36:00 AM

The harmonious mix of sound and smell.... in winter woods. Lovely haiku

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2022 12:25:00 AM

Perfect with sight and sound of winter.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/14/2022 12:17:00 AM

interesting haiku, is this Lasaad, hard work to keep on through the winter.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/13/2022 8:03:00 PM

The stunning picture, contrast of white upon green, and first words - exploding in sound & usage - wow-ed me. Thank you, Lasaad. Shalom shalom