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The Happiest Day of My Life

When I floated on air with exuberance And danced to the music of fun When I smelled the blue of the mountain And painted a masterpiece 'in one' When draped in silk and pink velvet I climbed up a steeple of joy When I swam in cold of the ocean And sang him his first lullaby.

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/16/2011 1:44:00 PM

Oh such a terrific read.Thanks for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/14/2011 8:15:00 AM

I love it , sure sounds like a happy and fulfilled day

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/7/2011 7:06:00 AM

This is beautiful, joy at the birth of your baby boy I think or shades of it:)))

Polly Plafcan

Date: 1/5/2011 10:08:00 PM

What can I say? This is beautiful. There is no room at all for improvement. love Polly Plafcan (pollyp)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/17/2010 1:14:00 PM

Well done Liz. I like this entry. So much happiness and joy. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/17/2010 10:26:00 AM

Hi Liz. Thanks for the visit. Best of luck with this colour filled day. The kids really do make things a little special. Eamon

Kash Poet

Date: 12/17/2010 5:00:00 AM

Beautiful write!Nice flow.-kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2010 2:04:00 PM

This does sound like quite a joyful day, Liz! Best wishes for success in the contest with this delightful poem. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 1:28:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winning work to me..That must have been a great day of your life..Good luck in the contest..Your presence at my work delighted me exceedingly..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/16/2010 11:31:00 AM

either there getting married or having babies. they seem to be the keys to happiness. john

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/15/2010 11:16:00 AM

Hello Liz, This is lovely, you have written this from such a special place. Love it Thank you for visiting me, your kind words are always appreciated. As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/13/2010 3:36:00 PM

Lovely lines Liz .. a beautiful entry into the contest posted .... good luck ... appreciate the joy of that first lullaby as I have five sons ... thankxx for your sweet and warm welcome comments on my poetry tonight with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/13/2010 11:41:00 AM

breathtaking delicay, liz... in a few lines, you nailed your thoughts like an ensemble... wishing you a winning streak in the contest! thanks for dropping by with your encouraging insight.. warmest, nette

Sidney Beck

Date: 12/12/2010 12:28:00 PM

Liz...this is lovely...a touch of Dylan Thomas somewhere in it I feel.......good luck in the contest......i hope to enter one also but I can't settle on a form, tone etc....glad you also know Ironbridge...long ago I used to sing at a small folk music place near the bridge for a few years.....best wishes....Syd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 7:38:00 PM

Cool way to approach this contest, LIz. I really enjoyed reading this one (it wAS for Frank's contest, wasn't it?) LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/9/2010 1:00:00 PM

i drank it all, liz.. a riveting,. flowing masterpiece so exhuberant, i'm sure my winning widhes will bear fruit! lovely!! warmest, nette