The Hanging

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The jury was unanimous
Twelve cried out justice
Guilty
It was just before the changing hour
The hanging planned for quarter past midnight or so
The moon was full, the shining light exposing deaths dance
The grim reaper was ready, one more for his collection

I was ready for this moment
Ready to face my freedom and my death
Long ago, a mirror shattered into twelve pieces
Twelve faces who said I have to go
Twelve past the midnight hour

Sacred ghosts haunting twilight hours
Whiskey filling the soul soon to be departed
The hangman at the ready with a somber face
For his duties he did not so much embrace
This evening he knew the hanging would take all effort
Of spirit and determination
To send this one of to his eternal damnation

He was shivering and I sensed in fear
As I stared at him solemnly in the mirror
We both eye to eye knew this day would come
The hangman and me, conscious of the sum

So the note was neatly written
The whiskey bottle all alone, empty on the floor
I stood bravely or maybe cowardly
Upon the wooden chair

The rope I wrapped around I my neck
As the hangman in the mirror was in despair
I patted him on the back and said no worries my friend
This, you see is the end of it all
All that we ever both wished or dreamed

A week or two later
They found the hangman
A rope around his neck
Staring blanking in the mirror

A note on the bedside table
Told this story as you hear
A man with a broken heart
Hanged because of his own mutilated reflection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/12/2016 8:08:00 PM
Crikey Arthur, your poem is very eerie and enticing - I'm still shivering - Lindsay
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 10:13:00 PM
Then I succeeded!Thanks mate!
Date: 2/12/2016 2:18:00 AM
Excellent piece Arthur. This one was a magnet. When I started reading it became more and more intense until the end. You have a way of reeling your reader in to the point of need to know! Excellent...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thank you for such nice words, very much appreciated!
Date: 2/9/2016 1:11:00 AM
To see ourselves in the mirror ,to see who we are broken in pieces,to set ourselves free from.the heartache of shattered dreams,and end it all,without considering the light that filters through between the glass pieces..that is terrible..No death in our daily life is worse than death itself....This poem gave me chills..Its sad and deep,and sad when we are so lost in that moment of not seeing at least one thing worth to live for in life. A fave.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 10:11:00 PM
I try to avoid mirrors! Thanks Charmaine!
Date: 2/8/2016 9:04:00 PM
Yikes! Quite a disturbing chain of events here. Sort of an out-of-body experience with the hangman patting the back of his own reflection. What an existence that would be to split yourself in two. Great imaginative piece.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thanks Timothy!
Date: 2/8/2016 3:48:00 PM
VERY Dark, ARthur!! I enjoyed how the hangman was the victim himself. Cleverly written.,
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!!! :)
Date: 2/8/2016 10:01:00 AM
We are our own hangman, by our pain we tie our own noose. Your story telling is twisted, creative in all insanity of the plot lines. Very well done Arthur. It is always a pleasure to see what comes from that intense imagination of yours.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2016 10:36:00 PM
Why thank you so much for such sweet praise! Lets hang around sometime!
Date: 2/8/2016 9:19:00 AM
Very powerful imagery. You described this tortuted soul vividly.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, and NO the poem is not about Jian Ghomeshi !!
Date: 2/8/2016 3:29:00 AM
Deep dark and depressing with intense imagery - you gripped my attention from start to finish Arthur :-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, hope you safe and sound on the bigger Island!
Date: 2/7/2016 10:58:00 PM
Bravo Arthur! "To thine own self be true" Your work is always worth waiting for. I love the way you weave your words :), jill
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:08:00 PM
Its 12.06 to lucky for you I could answer, cause well in another 6 minutes or so..............
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