The Hand of Fate

By a woman’s hand I’ve been told it’s true,
what mood she is in, and her temper too, 
so you must understand,
if a gun’s in that hand,
that she’s not entirely happy with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Babcock Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 4:54 PM
WOW a gun in the hand she must not be happy at all. lol Well done my friend. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Hello Phyllis … it's a certain way of making things right Phyllis … or else - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 4:28 PM
It's the little hints you have to go by!....Very funny.....love it!!.....pat
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:31 PM
G'day Pat … thank you Pat … goes without speaking - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 1:29 PM
No, I guess not Lindsay, I somehow sensed that! LOL. Hugs, Jenny
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Hello Jennifer … nothing more dangerous than a woman scorned Jennifer. The proof is in this pudding - thank you - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 3:29 PM
aha!!! This is very clever!!
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Hello Andrea … thank you Andrea. I just hope the bullets are blanks - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 6:54 PM
You have that right mate!
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:32 PM
G'day Timothy … I won't argue with you Timothy. Thanks Mate - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Aw, shoot! That's the good news? Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:31 PM
G'day Rico … of course - he's still alive - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 7:49 AM
LOL! Love it ;)
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Hello Maureen … pleased you got a kick out of this limerick - thank you - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 3:12 AM
Yikes, duck down lol.
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:28 PM
G'day Tom … too right Tom, as long as it's not too late - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 1:30 AM
I wish I could write humor like you do my friend. This Limerick had me howling! : )
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Hello Connie … in some cases, do you thing there may a ring of truth about it? Thank you Connie - Lindsay
Gauthier Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Bravo, Lindsay. Totally delightful limerick.
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Hello Line … thank you. Pleased you enjoyed it - Lindsay
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