The Halloween Meow

One Halloween night I heard at my door
a tiny meow that I couldn’t ignore.
Although I was busy preparing for all
the kids celebrating the fun of mid-fall,
the sound kept persisting “Meow Meow,”
insisting, “Please open your door to me now.”

I opened my door, and looking so pretty
there on the welcome mat sat a kitty.
It hardly was bigger than my own fist.
I bent down to get it. I couldn’t resist!
I think it would say (if it knew how to speak)
“I’m precious.” I held that small cat to my cheek.

How soft was the fur of that black green-eyed cat.
Bad luck could not come from a cat cute as that.
At first I’d observed a small string round its neck
with a small card attached and I’d thought, “What the heck?”
Next I sat down with the cat on my lap,
for that tiny note I just had to unwrap.

In very small words like a child might write
was scrawled “please keep me.”  Oh, boy, a fight
I’d soon have with hubbie, who would not be pleased
but when my heart’s set. . . it must be appeased!
Precious I named her and precious is she
years later – the Halloween Meow meant for me!

Oct. 18, 2020 for Halloween Meow Poetry Contest of Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 1/9/2022 9:00:00 AM
I like this very much Andrea.
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Date: 11/3/2020 12:25:00 PM
love this heartwarming write
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Date: 10/24/2020 10:25:00 PM
Congrats to you for your 'fur'st place win!
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Date: 10/24/2020 9:26:00 PM
Back with congratulations and a high five for your first place win!
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Date: 10/24/2020 4:59:00 PM
Well deserved ....so lovely
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Date: 10/24/2020 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Andrea!
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Date: 10/24/2020 2:09:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2020 1:23:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/24/2020 1:11:00 PM
- A sweet story, Andrea ... “please keep me” :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2020 1:09:00 PM
How lovely, I hope your hubby let you keep the precious kitty. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 10/24/2020 11:54:00 AM
This is just too sweet Andrea. Nicely done! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/20/2020 4:28:00 PM
I absolutely love this heart-warming piece, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 10/19/2020 5:17:00 PM
Really cute write of a fun little furry Halloween surprise. I think you might have meant "celebrating" in line 4. GL in the C and keep up the great writing, my friend.
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Date: 10/19/2020 1:09:00 PM
This is truly a precious story about Precious! Thank you for sharing. It's a winner!
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Date: 10/19/2020 2:02:00 AM
Oh Andrea Precious is the word to describe this. Wonderful imagery . I could see the little kitty sitting hopefully on the doorstep wondering what was going to happen now. Lucky for the kitty it was you. Love this. A fave for me. I have a beautiful coal black green eyed kitty I named Magic. She has one bright white star at the base of her throat.. She is so sweet and I love her a lot. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/19/2020 12:53:00 AM
Love me, love my cat. Cute poem. ~~
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Date: 10/18/2020 4:47:00 PM
That’s such a lovely Halloween Meow Andrea, who could resist a kitty so pretty. Loved every word, every line, every beat of this Halloween rhyme. Belle
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Date: 10/18/2020 3:55:00 PM
Such a fascinating Halloween kitty tale in poetic form, Andrea!! Simply a wondrous write!!
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Date: 10/18/2020 3:19:00 PM
So cute and very tender hearted Andrea. We had a black and white kitty when we were first married. We adopted her from a grandmother and small grandson who couldn't afford to keep her, feed her or care for her. Her name was Scooter.
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Date: 10/18/2020 3:12:00 PM
Wow wonderful poem, Well written rhyme and great story one of the best poets in Poetry Soup. Thank you for your kind comments. I work with my poems for cognitive therapy after cancer surgery and such so I appreciate your kindness. And the kindness of other Poetry Soup folks.
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Date: 10/18/2020 2:17:00 PM
Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest. I enjoyed reading your work. One showed up at my door and I let her stay. In a few weeks 3 more arrived since she gave birth. She was a good mother and for the two males I found homes. The female I kept and had her and her mother fixed. The mother got killed by a dog but the baby girl still lives the fall. Thanks for stopping by my page. I appreciate your nice comment. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2020 1:47:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You’ve penned such a engaging Halloween tale on a encounter with a cat. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Best wishes in the in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2020 1:26:00 PM
A cute, yet moving story Andrea. You are truly blessed Andrea to have Precious in your life. Didn't know this is how it happened.
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Date: 10/18/2020 1:31:00 PM
oh this is just fiction. But I did have a cute black cat once upon a time who died a few years ago. Her name was Razzmatazz.
Date: 10/18/2020 1:23:00 PM
Such a sweet, adorable write that is sure to win :) I love it, Andrea. Bless you with many more wonderful poems. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/18/2020 12:59:00 PM
aww such a touching tale Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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