Jami Patterson Poet Jueju

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'Poem Your Voice' Contest Info Sponsor Charles Messina 03-04-2026

The Hallow Path JU

Thickest mist will hide the way,
Gold has turned to leaden grey.
Forest paths begin to bend,
Seeking for a hidden end.

Voices whisper from the deep,
Promises they never keep.
Heart is heavy like a stone,
Walking in the dark alone.

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Linda Alice Fowler March 18, 2026 at 12:13 PM Congratulations Jami! :)

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2026 at 11:12 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Charles Messina March 17, 2026 at 11:51 AM Nicely penned, Jami. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie Jami Patterson March 17, 2026 at 7:46 PM Thank you so much.

sara Etgen-Baker March 6, 2026 at 9:53 PM I could feel the heaviness--well done! Jami Patterson March 17, 2026 at 7:47 PM Always looking forward to your feedback. Thanks so much.