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The Gushing Tears of Passion

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To the tenderness stream When we initially met, it was a graceful turn. Dreaming Around the bend in the copious spring She was conceived. Naturally out of a lonesome spot In my passionate heart At the deepest level of my angelic being Starting in the western hemisphere It's a feeling of yearning. With hungry haste that craves the longing. I wandered all the dulcet ways to Heaven. It was centered on the seventh dazzling sky. With my heart and spirit as well, From the bitterness of a youthful passion that split A person with many experiences Who is the most enthralled by her charm? She inquired as to where we had first met. We began singing simultaneously. Such a superb delight That's where we've got our knuckles curled up. On the sand of cuddles I am sinking, my friends, and I am enthralled. She swooped down to me, twirling in the horizons. When will we have a farewell drawing? Written: January 16, 2022

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:52:00 AM
Loved your romantic poem. Your imagery is wonderful.
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Date: 1/16/2022 5:30:00 PM
"We began singing simultaneously. Such a superb delight" The wonderful description of a great meeting and an enthralling moment in your life ! Great poetry Lasaad !
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