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The Gun On the wall above the fire place, Grandpa’s rifle still sits. I take it down now and then to clean, but put it back every time. That is where it belongs. Grandpa shot deer and elk, He even shot a bear. But, that was not entirely on purpose. The city guy was very happy… to be alive. No more explanation, needs to be written, on that account. Grandma could out shoot him, Twice as far, and three times on Sunday afternoon. But she did not brag. She often used her own 22 at the window where she did the dishes… to pick off dinner from her post, ever in the kitchen… cooking. This was life, at my grandparent’s home. We were never afraid.

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Date: 11/18/2019 2:51:00 PM
She sounds like a force to be reackoned with. "Grandma could out shoot him, Twice as far, and three times on Sunday afternoon. But she did not brag." - loved the whole poem Ann.
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/18/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thank you friend. You are a wonderful poet. I love your stuff. Have the nicest night. Ann
Date: 11/17/2019 2:18:00 PM
Love this one Ann. You paint a brilliant scene, almost as if I was there. Great work. best wishes....Ron :)
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/17/2019 9:21:00 PM
Welcome anytime... the are or were the coolest folks. I learned so much and miss them so. Have a wonderful night. God Bless... Ann

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