The Gulls Cry

The Gulls’ cries shrill in the night
Onto my thoughts they impose
I envy their wings and their melancholy songs
Carried over the ill wind that blows

I am here grounded to my faults and I watch 
 Imagining where I would fly had I wings 
Maybe I would hover over my homeland
Maybe it’s the same song I would sing

The endless sea of black calls them
As the gulls frantically fly overhead 
I listen silently to the crashing of the waves
And wonder if I am alive or if I am dead

They cry out to me as if they are mocking me
As if my thoughts are commonplace and trite
I look away from them for a moment
And know that all is lost again tonight

Soon my flight will take place
And I am sure to soar up to the sun
I will scorch my wings trying
And I will surely come undone

New beginnings sometimes call for violent ends
And I might be wrong for wishing them true
But the exhausting day has not given me the sails
This trip to finally construe 

The cobwebs are still here tonight 
And the wine clouds my mind
Here I stay in my prison
With my borders very well defined

The sky looks untouchable 
As do the majestic mountains ahead
In my sight the treacherous road
Which never has been tread

The gulls’ cries beckon me to look up again
The moon is hidden behind the clouds
As is my dream of soaring
In a veil of obscurity I shroud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Oimbo Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:47 AM
this is a well written poem. it touches my passions
Sfaelou Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Thank you. I'm happy it does. :)
Arnone Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Nice, imaginative write, Peggy. The only way that would work, in reality, would be to transfer your mind to that of a gull. Perhaps, once the thrill of flying fades, you might not want to be a gull at all.... ;-)
Sfaelou Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Perhaps. :) Thank you for your kind words.
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May 26, 2016 at 3:23 AM
Peggy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 25, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Peggy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Sfaelou Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome. I would love to read your work and of course to get feedback on mine. :)
Flower Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:25 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Peggy.:)
Sfaelou Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Thanks so much!
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