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The Guilt Inside

Just sitting here thinking over my mistakes. I've started to realize that this means there are no more breaks. I wanted to tell you the truth and I did. I knew it was the best it rather than lies which you forbid. You kissed me and said forget all the wrong we've done, Yet that was all that was on my mind is how we will be shunned.

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Date: 7/15/2016 10:30:00 AM
We all make mistakes in life Adelita just need to move forward and learn from them - I found the final line of your poem quite sad:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:29:00 PM
Adelita, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:41:00 PM
Adelita, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/9/2015 1:28:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Adelita - A great poem, nice to share words and thoughts here - Looking forward to more poems from you in the future :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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