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the growth of rain

heaven on its knees, drop by drop sprinkling like sweat from our skies' bruised brow, pouring out the macadam in my scars— following floods race my tears' deja vu.

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Date: 9/18/2023 2:11:00 PM
Small typo, fid you mean “drop by drop”? I too have those deja vu moments. Thanks for your visit.
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Paige Hind
Date: 9/18/2023 2:51:00 PM
Hey, yes I did! Thanks for the help, friend!

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