The Greeter

yellow meadowlark offering sweet melodies atop a fencepost my mood suddenly lightened I stroll toward the woodland
Written May 23, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Win-win. You and the happy bird. Bill
Hankins Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 9:22 AM
That is so true, Bill. Thanks!
Wolf Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 9:49 PM
I saw the same bird at Walmart once. He was better than any of their other greeters. lol.
Hankins Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 9:22 AM
(chucking) Did it check your packages before letting you into the store, gw? They can be ruthless, those greeters, you know.
Hawkins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Yet another lovely poem that lightened my mood and day. Thank you, Milt.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Shirley, for your sweet, thoughtful comment on my tanka.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 1:14 PM
What a marvelous greeting!
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Thanks so much, Caren. I appreciate it.
Bauer Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:31 PM
Beautifully done, Milton!
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Thanks, Ilene, for your affirming comment. I really appreciate your thoughts.
Meadows Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:43 AM
The birdsong is lovely to hear. Well written.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Thanks so much, Jeanette. It is so nice to hear from you. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:43 AM
a lovely picture and message, Milt! I keep seeing tanka poems today. I wonder if someone put up a tanka contest.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Not that I know of, Andrea. I had spent a lot of time writing longer poems, so I thought I'd return to some forms I find difficult...haiku and tanka. I think almost anyone can write them, but it is so difficult to write good, memorable ones. Good to hear from you. I hope you are well.
Logan Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:35 AM
I agree with Tom's thought. There's nothing sweeter than bird songs before dawn, and all the world seems still asleep.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Absolutely. They are particularly vocal in the morning hours, and sometimes I awaken to their choruses outside my bedroom window. Have a marvelous day, Jenna.
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Nothing more soothing than the sweet sound of birdsong, the wonders of nature. Tom.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 10:41 AM
One of my great pleasures is to sit on my front porch and listen to the birds calling to each other. I pick up on the different males calls and their female responses. It is, indeed, fascinating!
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