The Green Bench

Hidden past the highway bend, 
a bench clings to a shallow cliff
above a beach where banks extend
across the bay in sandy drifts.
When tides are low, the sea withdraws,
to flaunt the treasured ocean floor,
and anyone can walk across
the sand to reach the other shore.
With green paint peeling like old flesh,
the bench is baked in salt and sun.
Remember when the paint was fresh,
and in your arms I came undone? 
From here, we watch the water snag
in grooves of sand like buried mirrors. 
The sky is pink as sunlight fades.
Come close, my love, I need you nearer.

*This poem is based on the green bench (yes, it really exists!) at Sand Dollar Beach, located in the Rose Bay area of Nova Scotia, Canada
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Heather, Congratulations in Francine's, contest.. nice "Wearing of the Green" entry. always~ Linda
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations on this win gain Heather...
Macfarlane Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 1:00 PM
The images you so wonderfully wrote, makes us all want to visit your green bench. Awesome write and win! Hugs
Dillard Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on a really great love story here! I like them like I like my steaks, not over done, but tender and sweet! RAY
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 6:37 AM
Congrats, Heather!
Roberts Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 11:19 PM
congrats on your win Heather, great entry
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:49 PM
yours was one of my very favorites in this contest. how good to see it rated high. Congrats, my friend.
Ryerson Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Well Heather, this one makes me want to visit Nova Scotia for sure...I am an absolute ocean freak and you have made me homesick for the sea...Exquisite and near flawless poetry...You're pretty good you know?...Congratulations! - Tim
A   Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 10:12 PM
Hi Heather, this is awesome...Linda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 28, 2013 at 3:41 AM
Congratulations on your win heather love xx
Gorelick Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Swoon! A wonderful, romantic poem. congrats. BG
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Loved it just as much the second time Heather .. Donna, congratulations!
Jerden Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 2:22 PM
Awesome imagery, Heather! We all have those special places, don't we? Congratulations on your fine win!
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 1:21 PM
This is wonderful Heather. I would have put it no. 1. Congratulations and thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
Hunter Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Congrats Heather!
Eastman Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Beautifully written... Very interesting place to see... I'm sure.
Cavanaugh Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Wow, what a beautifully flowing well written poem. This will go in my favorites.
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 10:19 AM
beautiful write, Heather. Thanks - loved the contest : )
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Heather, this is just haunting in its beauty. I don't think luck is an issue with this one! Donna
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 4:46 PM
HOW COOL is this??? If I were Susan, it would be top of my list. It's so beautiful And gosh you could even use it for a green contest. haha. Love it.
Williams Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Heather this is a stunning piece with a wonderful image...David
Zerbst Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 10:16 AM
I am sure that watching the beach in Nova Scotia is a wonderful view. You have done a brilliant job of capturing a picture of this beauty. Eloquent words; I like the meter you have chosen for this one.
Johnson Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Hey this is great. Perfect rhyme. I am glad you stopped at my poetry so that I found you. As to my poem yes it is for the contest and thank you for your kind words. Love, Joyce
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March 14, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Now I want to take a trip to Nova Scotia. "in grooves of sand like buried mirrors." is my favorite line. I like how your mind works.
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