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The Green and Fading Afternoon

The green and fading afternoon
as starkness sets within, behind,
long shadows creep, with twilight soon.
The green and fading afternoon
releases brute bubonic moon.
The town folks dream with peace of mind.
The green and fading afternoon.
as starkness sets within, behind.

1/31/2022

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Hilo Poet Date: 2/2/2022 5:58:00 AM Wondrous rhythmic fluidity balanced by the relevant imagery set by methodic words. You've painted a beautiful exposé here, Kim, nicely done, Aloha! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/2/2022 9:14:00 AM Thank you, William! :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/1/2022 7:23:00 PM 'The town folks dream with peace of mind' -- that line makes this poem really work for me. Love the feeling of calm after reading it. Thanks, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/1/2022 7:29:00 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/1/2022 5:51:00 AM Lovely! I enjoyed the voice of your poem. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/1/2022 6:31:00 AM Thanks so much!

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/1/2022 4:20:00 AM I like this one. It creates a feeling of calm. It flows seamlessly. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/1/2022 5:22:00 AM Thank you. Do you see the menace looming. Is the state of peace in lieu of or in ignorance of the coming plague? It could be seen either way given our current circumstances. :)

Joe Dimino Date: 2/1/2022 3:40:00 AM Beautiful, Kim! Enchanting. Mother Nature really does go on, taking conscious care, even while we sleep. If only we would reciprocate, as much while awake. Have a beautiful day my friend! Login to Reply Joe Dimino Date: 2/1/2022 8:03:00 AM Yes, read again, now see the ominous stirrings, and warning of impending disaster...Mother Nature needs to wake her children before the dawn of destruction. Brilliant write! Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/1/2022 5:22:00 AM Thank you, Joe :)

Debra L Brown Date: 1/31/2022 7:34:00 PM Hi, Kim You sure have painted a lovely evening scene, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/31/2022 8:14:00 PM Should be terrifying. The peace of dreams that knows not what is coming. Thank you ;)