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The Greedy Brown Rat

THE GREEDY BROWN RAT ~~~~~~~~~~~~ the greedy brown rat was becoming obese from stealing food off our table blasé he became fearless no fright he had a surprise a trap, now he's a fable

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/2/2018 6:43:00 AM

The greedy become careless thus trapping themselves! Nice one, Mick!

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/2/2018 11:25:00 AM

Often the case, Thanks Kim :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2018 8:31:00 PM

wow, I think this is the first time I ever heard of this form, let alone see a poem written in it. I quite like it!!!

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/2/2018 4:26:00 AM

Another short and sweet form! Give me a nudge if you do one, please. Best wishes... Mick

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2018 8:09:00 PM

Haha, crime doesn't pay, even for a rat. Regards Tom

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/2/2018 4:24:00 AM

It was a mouse, a woodmouse, just get it to fit, the trap did though, and I hasten to add it was a humane one. Best wishes... Mick