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Geldhahn

- the Greedy Are Poor -

Pure hands, bloody lamb

Fight the war - of the dark grave

Truth prevails - Amen












10.10.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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November 3, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Money can't buy love or happiness. Great message Anne-Lise.
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November 4, 2017 at 6:11 AM
- Judith, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Much said in a few words!
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:39 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Beaufort Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 6:17 PM
You have the entire source of human suffering summarized in short order! You are a talent not to be underestimated.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:39 AM
- Thank you very much, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Loughman Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:29 PM
Amen! The truth is all we have...strong words beautifully expressed..thank you! P.S. Love the faucet! Donna-:)
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October 26, 2017 at 4:38 AM
- Thank you very much, Donna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Now them words hold power, nicely said.
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October 26, 2017 at 4:38 AM
- Thank you very much, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:01 PM
A powerful truth you've penned Anne-Lise. Love the title. A wondrous write that I've enjoyed this evening!
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October 26, 2017 at 4:37 AM
- Thank you very much, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 12:17 AM
I hope you are well, I am worried, or else you have this facet and you left us!!!! LOL Hugs
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:37 AM
:) - hugs :)
Vaso Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Now I sure wish I had one of those faucets at my place!!!!!!! :) :)
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October 26, 2017 at 4:36 AM
- Thank you very much, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 12, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Power to truth, Anne-Lise. This is one mighty fine Amen poem! An instant fave. Pure honesty poem for sure. Love and hugs always.
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October 26, 2017 at 4:36 AM
- Thank you very much, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Well said, Sunshine . Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:37 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:38 AM
A powerful message Anne Lise, and so true..
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October 11, 2017 at 2:37 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Yes, the truth will always win over anything! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning! I believe in your poem, and I find it to be a well executed belief! What a grand piece, Great Work!!
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October 11, 2017 at 2:36 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2017 at 2:24 AM
Excellent revelation in your few words. Well said. Thank you very much for sharing it.
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October 11, 2017 at 2:36 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 11, 2017 at 12:23 AM
Great senryu my dear friend, Annelise~ Thanks for sharing and your kind visit on my poem. Best wishes always. Hugs back at you. love lots, leonora
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October 11, 2017 at 2:35 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:30 PM
well said Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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October 11, 2017 at 2:34 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:13 PM
So true--well said, Anne-Lise--Love that picture!
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October 11, 2017 at 2:34 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 2:36 PM
Amen again, well written Anne-Lise...
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October 10, 2017 at 2:45 PM
- Hard to find the right title, sorry I have changed it three times now :))) - Thanks for visiting and comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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