The Greatest Thief

"Time is the thief you cannot banish."
                         Phyllis McGinley, Writer, 1905 - 1978


A most curious thing is time.
While you are enjoying it,
it’s up to its usual crime -
being the thief you can’t outwit!

     When it’s bad, it’s so very bad.
     A most curious thing is time,
     and when you are feeling most glad,
     it never will be more sublime.

Each day to the sky, sun will climb.
You’ll think to yourself – a new dawn!
A most curious thing is time.
In shadows, you’ll grieve that it’s gone.

     It’s robbing us now! This we know
     the more keenly as past our prime
     into the “golden” years we go.
     A most curious thing is time.

Nov. 10, 2020
For the  Writing Challenge - Quote Inspired - Poetry Contest
of Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 3:45 AM
Congrats on your winner. I like the last line.."A most curious thing is time." It slips away especially when we do soup. Sara
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Enjoyed reading,Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:02 AM
Hi Andrea, I’m just coming back to say congrats on win:-) Alexis
Watt Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea!
May Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:36 AM
Very nicely done Andrea, Congrats on a well deserved win..
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:46 AM
It’s interesting, we long to retire so that we have more time when in fact our time is close to running out. I enjoyed your winning poem Andrea.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 2:14 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:09 PM
I am back here, Andrea, to congratulate you on your win!!
Watt Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:08 PM
A most intriguing quatern on the subject of time's unstoppable march and our watching it go by as bodies age and memories grow more distant. I like how you used the word 'crime' to tie in the thief theme plus serve as a rhyme! It reads like a winner to me ~ John
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Hello Andrea … possible the only thing that is eternal as it just keeps marching on - thanks again Andrea - Lindsay
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 3:44 AM
Sure, time is so curious, and it's such a crafty thief too. Yet, time won't outwit your lines!!
Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 12:19 PM
wonderfully written and so well thought-out, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
Macfarlane Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Love this Andrea. These days work has taken most of my time. Had 3 days off in the month of October, with double shifts in there. Time to scale back a bit, lol. Terrific write on time. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:28 AM
- It's crazy to think about how fast time goes, Andrea :) - At least considering that I currently feel like an 80-year-old with a heating pad as a best friend :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Love this dear Andrea. A beauty that is sure to succeed as a winner. God bless you with many many more
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:11 AM
WoW! Andrea, The quote inspired you to write a good piece of poetry. Time is the thief we can’t do nothing about. It is robbing us at this second and we all will have to surrender to it one day. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend- Alexis
Pandit Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:19 AM
It robs us all (and fools us into thinking we are having a good time)--you said it well, Andrea. Well written, as always. All the best.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 2:36 AM
It is like we have an invisible special clock. When the time ends, we just say goodbye. ~~
One Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 2:36 AM
time, time, time.. what has become of me.. When we are young we want to be older, when we are old, we want to be young and we wonder where have all those years gone...
Cunningham Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 1:48 AM
Our clocks are ticking, they never stop. Tom
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:29 PM
Just love it Andrea, a timely reminder it is running out:-) hugs jan xx
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