The Greatest Show On Earth

The Greatest Show on Earth

Mr. Pik lived alone, across our street -
All the kids knew him, dressed up so neat;

Mr. Pik loved the circus – every kind -
Each year, in our mailbox, tickets, we’d find;

So much excitement - growing every day -
Circus, the topic, when we went to play.

We watched the clock tick away afternoon -
Finally night came - for us none too soon.

Girls dressed in dresses - shoes - patent leather -
Boys in bow ties - no matter the weather;

Families scrunched in old station wagons -
Sounding just like an asthmatic dragon;

Seven miles from the big top we could taste
Popcorn and peanuts, oh please, do make haste;

Ladies and gentlemen, look here and see
The ringmaster pointed us to ring three;

First came the clowns with red funny noses
Squirting the crowd – water from fake roses;

Next, the acrobats riding sleek horses,
Purples plumes on their heads – never off course;

Lions and tigers - elephants, oh my -
Animals exotic paraded by;

Walkers on tightropes left us all breathless –
Covered our eyes, watching never the less;

Finally the last act – our hearts would seize -
Daring young man on the flying trapeze;

Sleepy eyes closing on the ride home -
Night at the circus so like a poem;

Rollicking, boisterous evening of mirth
Mr. Pik’s gift – the greatest show on earth.

Every year our neighbor, Mr. Pik - a widower - would treat the neighborhood to a night at the circus.

I know thought has changed about having wild animals in the circus but in my childhood they were a part of the show.
5/2/20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/7/2020 9:12:00 PM
How precious your memories are, Sam. I loved the lively imagery, especially; 'Families scrunched in old station wagons - Sounding just like an asthmatic dragon;'. Brilliant! You captured the anticipation a child feels and the breathless excitement of the big top.. but most of all, you captured the generous spirit of a kindhearted neighbor in your enthralling poem. Your note about Mr. Pik was so touching. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2020 10:24:00 PM
Going to the circus was such a special, and memorable experience for our neighborhood. You are right, they are precious memeories of childhood. And so is Mr. Pik - we really loved him. Thank you for your warm words and your congratulations! Hope all is well with you. The best to you.
Date: 5/5/2020 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. The circus was always a great time of the year. That one very special neighbor will always be remembered. I have a couple of them. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula! We are so blessed to have people like Mr. Pik in our childhood and blessed to have those special memeories of childhood. Be blessed.
Date: 5/5/2020 10:50:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sam - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2020 10:26:00 PM
Hi Gregory! Happy Cinco de Maya week! All is well. Thank you for your congratulations and warm wishes. All is well. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Be blessed.
Date: 5/5/2020 1:11:00 PM
Some really neat imagery, very very cool! e.g., an asthmatic dragon!!! A 1st in my book, Sam
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/8/2020 10:45:00 PM
Couldn't resist the asthmatic dragon. Thank you for your vote of confidence - so appreciated. Always good to hear from you. Hope is well. Blessings.
Date: 5/5/2020 11:06:00 AM
Sam, such a delightful poem to read. What a generous neighbor you had with Mr. Pik. As children going to the circus was an exciting time for us. You managed to capture that feeling so well within your poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 5/8/2020 10:48:00 PM
Your visit, Sonia, is so appreciated. Thank you. We would talk about the circus before and after that special evening. And, Mr. Pik was special - quiet and dignified. Sounds like you loved the circus!
Date: 5/4/2020 7:17:00 PM
What a generous man you have paid homage to, Sam. Those memories of the circus seem so fresh in your mind! Fun memories in enjoyable couplets ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/4/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thank you! Going to the circus as a neighborhood was an a very memorable experience every year and gave us a chance to get to know Mr. Pik. He left a wonderful legacy of generosity.
Date: 5/3/2020 8:47:00 PM
One more treat kids can't enjoy anymore, once Barnum and Bailey called it quits... A shame! Great write, Sam! :) gw
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/4/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! Yes it is! No more running away to join the circus! What's a kid to do?
Date: 5/3/2020 3:53:00 AM
A great show Sam and a great neighbour. Over Fork Over Tom
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Date: 5/3/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom. Mr. Pik was a quiet, yet dignified man - a part of our neighborhood in such a special way - giving us special memories of the circus and generosity. There were over seventy kids in twenty houses on one block! Be blessed! Over Fork Over!
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