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I am in couplet mode this week!

The Great Web:

Little bright coloured flowers flowing everywhere, I don't know their names but their aroma fills the air. Softly swaying as they bend in the summer's breeze, How I love them so because I'm easy to please. Life itself is often missed in a blink of the eye, Not many take the time to even question why. Life is never wasted but one may feel antique, When the greatest gift is life itself that we must seek. And for all that is alive shall also pass on by, The journey of the two is like the light and dark sky. As all things are connected in the invisible great web, Life can be seen as the inward tide and death as the ebb. I'm certain when this life ends another shall manifest, Until that day comes give me strength and give me zest.
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Cadet Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 3:00 AM
The Invisible Great Web. Very nice work, Wolf. -- Wesley C.
Cadet Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Ok. Very nice. I read this backwards (by line) and rearranged the lines. It reads so well in many ways. w
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 3:08 AM
Six degrees of separation! Mathematically speaking of course! Haha. Cheers, Wesley /|\
Kimathi Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Deep, philosophical and intuitive!!! Congrats with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Thank you for reading it, Teddy! Have a great day /|\
Mhangwa Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Lovely!
Salehi Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Indeed... well said
Rockwell Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Great job!!! Love it! Congrats on POTD!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:04 PM
A strong poem, WW. Worthy of POTD. Congrats, friend for this wonderful poem. Love and peace.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 2:26 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - Beautiful :)
Maverick Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 1:51 PM
enjoyable flow and content W W, congrats on potd.'
Wanter Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Soon it will be Spring and little flowers will grow and wilt but your poem's encouragement will live.
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:50 AM
What a lovely thing to say! Thank you, Sunlite /|\
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Alexis /|\
Smith Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Congrats Budgie!!!
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thanks, Tim /|\
Downing  Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:14 AM
Great morning read of this beautiful and uplifting poem. I enjoyed it so this morning. Congratulation, White, on potd :)
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you very much, Akkina /|\
Turner Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations White Wolf on POTD honors:)
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Thank you, Daniel! /|\
Krampe Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on POTD, White Wolf.
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Thank you very much, Agnes /|\
B. Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Congrats on POTD! I love the message .
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Carol /|\
Sietesantos Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations and a 7 for your POTD award! Well-deserved! Excellent, enjoyable, inspirational piece! Pandita
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Thank you, Pandita /|\
Smith Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors, well done...
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, Charlie /|\
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Indeed, wonderful and very entertaining. Congrats :)
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Thank you so much! /|\
Kamble Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 2:11 AM
Amazing!!! :)
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thank you /|\
Herlihy Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:38 AM
Some profound insights lifting their blossomed heads in this charming group of couplets. Enjoyed them very much. JH
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 2:43 AM
I'm glad you found enjoyment in this my new friend! /|\
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Life is a great gift I truly treasure,White, thank you Hugs
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Eve /|\
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:33 PM
what a lovely and inspirational message. VERy well rhymed!
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea /|\
Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:58 PM
ohh, what a heartfelt poem where each phrase shines with divine thrill, wwolf!... huggs
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment, Nette /|\
White Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Budgie, you can add pictures again, it's fixed :)
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Thank for letting me know, Duir, I will now! /|\
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Wow , this is so good White wolf!! I would like to save it in my favorites. Special writing this is. :)
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi /|\
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