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I am in couplet mode this week!

Little bright coloured flowers flowing everywhere, I don't know their names but their aroma fills the air. Softly swaying as they bend in the summer's breeze, How I love them so because I'm easy to please. Life itself is often missed in a blink of the eye, Not many take the time to even question why. Life is never wasted but one may feel antique, When the greatest gift is life itself that we must seek. And for all that is alive shall also pass on by, The journey of the two is like the light and dark sky. As all things are connected in the invisible great web, Life can be seen as the inward tide and death as the ebb. I'm certain when this life ends another shall manifest, Until that day comes give me strength and give me zest.

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Date: 2/12/2017 3:00:00 AM
The Invisible Great Web. Very nice work, Wolf. -- Wesley C.
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Date: 2/17/2017 1:38:00 AM
Ok. Very nice. I read this backwards (by line) and rearranged the lines. It reads so well in many ways. w
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White Wolf
Date: 2/12/2017 3:08:00 AM
Six degrees of separation! Mathematically speaking of course! Haha. Cheers, Wesley /|\
Date: 2/10/2017 3:55:00 AM
Deep, philosophical and intuitive!!! Congrats with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/10/2017 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for reading it, Teddy! Have a great day /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 2:17:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 2/5/2017 11:39:00 PM
Indeed... well said
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Date: 2/4/2017 8:26:00 PM
Great job!!! Love it! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 2/4/2017 7:04:00 PM
A strong poem, WW. Worthy of POTD. Congrats, friend for this wonderful poem. Love and peace.
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Date: 2/4/2017 2:26:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - Beautiful :)
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Date: 2/4/2017 1:51:00 PM
enjoyable flow and content W W, congrats on potd.'
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:32:00 AM
Soon it will be Spring and little flowers will grow and wilt but your poem's encouragement will live.
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:50:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say! Thank you, Sunlite /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 11:13:00 AM
Congrats Budgie!!!
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thanks, Tim /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 10:14:00 AM
Great morning read of this beautiful and uplifting poem. I enjoyed it so this morning. Congratulation, White, on potd :)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Akkina /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations White Wolf on POTD honors:)
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, White Wolf.
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Agnes /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! I love the message .
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Carol /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations and a 7 for your POTD award! Well-deserved! Excellent, enjoyable, inspirational piece! Pandita
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors, well done...
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 5:32:00 AM
Indeed, wonderful and very entertaining. Congrats :)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much! /|\
Date: 2/4/2017 2:11:00 AM
Amazing!!! :)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/4/2017 11:40:00 AM
Thank you /|\
Date: 2/3/2017 2:38:00 AM
Some profound insights lifting their blossomed heads in this charming group of couplets. Enjoyed them very much. JH
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White Wolf
Date: 2/3/2017 2:43:00 AM
I'm glad you found enjoyment in this my new friend! /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 8:11:00 PM
Life is a great gift I truly treasure,White, thank you Hugs
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Eve /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 6:33:00 PM
what a lovely and inspirational message. VERy well rhymed!
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 1:58:00 PM
ohh, what a heartfelt poem where each phrase shines with divine thrill, wwolf!... huggs
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment, Nette /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 11:54:00 AM
Budgie, you can add pictures again, it's fixed :)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thank for letting me know, Duir, I will now! /|\
Date: 2/2/2017 8:10:00 AM
Wow , this is so good White wolf!! I would like to save it in my favorites. Special writing this is. :)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 4:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi /|\
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