The Great Circle

How much do I love you?
I've played to know.
Let me count the ways,
All the ways I can show,
You my Love...

First there was one
and by one she stood.
Two came along,
an expansion of love.
Then three held hands
near a willow tree,
As four sang carols
to the humming bee.
Five was there,
like a guiding light...
Finally, we recognized Six.
And we stopped the fight.
Seven was right,
there are Eight 
gates in Heaven.
Nine sang divine,
And ten at the 'end'...?
Was a mistaken, eleven.

Twelve chimed "New Time".
And Ophiuchus was restored,
To Her, proper place of Mind.
Among Friends,
In the Great Circle.


*wiki.com
Ophiuchus  is a large constellation located around the
celestial equator. Its name is Greek for 'snake-holder', and it is commonly represented as
a man grasping the snake that is represented by the constellation Serpens....



"~Charming story..."
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February 8, 2009 at 9:00 PM
This is lovely. The footnote was a great help as I was not familiar with the story. A wonderful story and great read! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin
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February 8, 2009 at 7:45 PM
Great work and welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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