Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

The Great Abyss

I walk in silence as I defile
Chasing circles with a vixen vile
Only the shadows know my pain
For I walk in silence of slumbering shame

With solitudes of the fortress built
I walk in silence with a gainful guilt
No tomorrows for the sorrows sing
For I walk in silence with a sinful sting

Tears that build an ocean view
With crying clouds and a haunting hue
I walk in silence within your essence
Quicksand thoughts and projected presence

The minstrel plays a saddened song
Listening in the deafening silence that I furlong
Lonely lingering in the great abyss
For I dare to dream for your silent kiss.


July.22.2016
Loneliness - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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John Hamilton July 25, 2016 at 10:10 PM Forgot my 7, there done! Winged Warrior July 25, 2016 at 10:29 PM Thank you Sir...but I think you have given me a 7 already...does it mean I get a 14 lol...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton July 25, 2016 at 8:57 PM Wow! WW that's a lot of W's. What a great write "tears that build an ocean view" just phenomenal writing. A definite 7 congrats on win. Winged Warrior July 25, 2016 at 9:08 PM Thank you John...for your kind words my friend...my name is also John by the way...god bless...^WW^

Angie Thomas July 24, 2016 at 1:17 PM This is such a deep poignant write about a lost love... I'm working my way through a breakup myself so I understand how you feel... **7** Winged Warrior July 24, 2016 at 2:50 PM Thank you, my friend, Angie...sometimes loneliness is the only thing we have...and hopefully, you will come out with flying colors my friend... god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. July 24, 2016 at 7:15 AM Hi WW, I really enjoyed your take on the theme of the contest. You captured "loneliness" very well. Congrats on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Winged Warrior July 24, 2016 at 7:32 AM Thank you Alexis...your comment has made me feel less lonely lol...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith July 24, 2016 at 1:04 AM Well done WW, wear this honor with pride. Well done... Winged Warrior July 24, 2016 at 7:09 AM Thank you Charlie...god bless...^WW^

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores July 23, 2016 at 11:44 PM Congratulations WW on the placement of the contest Winged Warrior July 24, 2016 at 7:08 AM Thank you, Nayda...it was fun...I think?lol...god bless...^WW^

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2016 at 9:21 AM You captured this emotion so well. A 7 for this moving write. Winged Warrior July 23, 2016 at 11:28 AM Thank you Richard...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 2:03 PM - A poem with emotion, great written - I agree with Tim ..... the last verse is awesome - Luck in the contest W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 3:55 PM Thank you Anne-Lise...who can be lonely with your "Sunshine Smile"...god bless...^WW^

Tim Smith July 22, 2016 at 1:25 PM Very nice my winged friend...That last verse is amazing Winged Warrior July 22, 2016 at 1:28 PM Thank you Tim my friend...always nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^