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The Grave Yard of Love

Long love day's has past. My mind felt with howling storms, grasping to hold on to vanishing love. Rape and abandon my weary soul transpires, poring with instant fires. Oh this dark secret love does thy life destroy. Like amorous birds of pray, Once ways, and known devoured Your beauty no more to befound nor shall the sound of your voice. Love to dust, love to ashes. Our love has now gone to a private place. The grave yard of love.

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George Anos

Date: 10/15/2008 9:10:00 PM

You have it in you Jay. Although the phrasing and wordings need a little bit more of work, your thoughts and your mind's expressions blows me away. I hope that practice and further reading will bring out that magical and wonderful poet in you! i am saying this honestly my friend.. YOU REALLY HAVE IT IN YOU! I hope you won't fail to further sharpen your untrained talent because an enormous amount of potential is within you! :o) I'll be watching! George (The Olongapoet- Olongapo city denizen)

Deneen White

Date: 10/11/2008 5:46:00 PM

I am sorry that the love is gone, I am not sure if this is inspired of recent events or not, but this is an eloquent heartfelt write, take care D-nyce

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/11/2008 4:24:00 PM

I like your use of figurative language in this poem. It flows quite well and is very descriptive. I can see the images of what has made its way to the grave yard of love. Tomorrow will be a better day; believe me and count on that. Great job! ~Joseph

Elizabeth Gasperecz

Date: 10/8/2008 10:10:00 PM

Powerful, beautiful work, Jay. Yes, there is as much inspiration in the woes of love as there are in the pleasures of it! Please keep writing. Elizabeth

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/8/2008 4:50:00 AM

Oh so desperately and beautifully sad. The emotion here is deep and powerful. If there is any truth, so sorry for such loss and heartache. Love, Shar

Maf Longfellow

Date: 10/8/2008 1:13:00 AM

THOU HAST PUT MY FEELINGS OF LOST LOVES INTO SCRIPTURE. "LOVE TO DUST,LOVE TO ASHES..." MY FAVORITE PASSAGE IN YOUR POEM . BRAVO POET FRIEND, MARILYN