The Gratitude Walk

I walk along the slippery shore.
of the shingled beach
that welcomes the inland sea.
The sun rises slowly in the east,
lighting my way amongst 
the small rocks and drying seaweeds.
There is a lift inside me
that nurture enthusiasm.

Peace and quiet reign around
disturbed occasionally by the barks
of sprightly dogs that race upon the sand,
the squawks of gulls gliding gluttonously
swooping down for their repast.

I look with sympathy on other walkers
on the beach.  Thus, I meditate,
a marvellously therapeutic exercise. 
Who am I, Lord, to deserve all this?

The quiet meditation calms my mind. 
lowers my blood pressure,
a spiritually potent release.
My mind is tranquil, 
I know who I am,
my soul is happy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Callus Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Nature and beautiful surroundings are a balm to our mind and soul, Victor; unfortunately not everybody appreciates the many gifts we get for free. ~ I wish you all the best at this special time of the year, my friend. // paul
Bayles Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Victor, in this poem I feel great peace and joy. Gratitude is such a powerful thing.
Gifford Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Hello Victor, this is simply a beautiful picture you have painted. It leaves you feeling so relaxed and peaceful. Have a wonderful day, my poet friend.
Williams Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 1:46 AM
Dearest Victor, just popped by to see how you were doing. Victor, this is such a soothing piece… it feels like walking beside you on that quiet shore. The way you blend the small details — the dogs, the gulls, the seaweed, the morning light — creates such a calming, healing atmosphere. Your reflection at the end is especially beautiful… that moment where peace settles in and the soul feels recognised. A truly uplifting read. Hugs
Rolland Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:59 PM
wonderful, a moment of grace, thanks poet
Winter Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:56 PM
This poem provides a calmness to my mind. I'm truly grateful I read it. You write so beautifully my dear friend. Best, Anne
Gentile Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 4:25 AM
Victor, your words evoke such peaceful and contemplative thoughts that one can really feel the calmness!! This is such a beautiful write, I walk every day around a lovely lake filled of small creatures and love and I feel exactly how you've described! Happy Thursday!
Poet Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 1:34 AM
Your profound admiration for the natural world is truly inspiring, Victor. The sea, a soothing matron, cradles our weary souls. From your words, a gentle stream of positive feelings flows.
George Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:10 PM
When such thoughts of gratitude come to our mind, we will be happy counting all our blessings. Your poem is so soothing and beautiful. Enjoyed your walk along the beautiful beach.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:19 PM
loved experiencing your walk of gratitude. Thanks for sharing
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 11:58 AM
Who am I, Lord, to deserve all this? That is truly the right question. And yet he blesses us every day. Amen!
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 9:06 AM
The ocean can have this feeling. I am glad your felt close to the Creator. :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Very comforting poem Victor. I am always so blessed when I actually am able to get on the site and read beautiful poetry. Your poem is lovely!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:38 AM
On solemn occasions, the soul in its search for answers finds it readily obliging as always, sans failure.
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 4:32 AM
Ahhh!! I like this quiet walk with the prayer to God and the thankfulness. I appreciate you sharing it with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Love this, Victor. A big Fave for me
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:55 PM
I’m pleased to read that you are happy, nature is a wonderful healer. It must be delightful to live by the sea. A lovely poem Victor… Beryl
Greenhough Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 1:51 PM
I enjoy your great appreciation of nature. The ocean seems to be our calming mother. Good emotions flow from your words.
Leake Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Nicely done Victor Enjoyed your verse, a nice walk with gratitude Best wishes Kevin
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