The Good Earth

My daddy was a farmer, 
a good one who knew how to 
manipulate the elements in order
to achieve agricultural success. 

He was well aware that all 
of the elements play their part
and are necessary for growth but
the most tangible one is the soil.
I have seen him take
a handful, smell it,
work it and then let it
run through his fingers back
to the good earth from which it came.

If it smelled sour, he would take loads of lime 
and spread them over his vast fields.
If it clumped as he worked it, he knew
it was too wet and he must have patience.
Dry, lifeless soil alerted him
to add living organisms.

He would top dress the soil 
with aged manure,
collected free of charge from
his livestock, cows,
sheep, horses, chickens.
Nothing went to waste on the farm.
Or he might know it was time to
rest a field for a season,  
He would plant a cover crop
which would grow and
be plowed back into the soil
to give it new vigor.

He planted on faith that
the rains would come,
the sun would shine
and the winds would be still,
when the crop seeds  were ripe.
Heavy winds could take his seeds before
he could safely harvest them.

Next year he would start again
and prepare his soil
so that all elements could work together to
insure success. 




Won 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/9/2011 5:06:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on a wonderful win in the elements contest my friend.. a superb beauty as always.. luv..
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Leighann's "Earthly Elements" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2011 12:40:00 AM
magnificently written Joyce . a wonderful creation ..good luck in the contest luv.. touches the depths of emotion...luv..
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:55:00 PM
You can have all of the other elements (as we do here in Florida), but without good soil, most plants will not grow. Very little grows in our sand. It sounds like your father took pride in his work and I guess you inherited that quality from him, dear. I have been hard-pressed to come up with something for this contest, but your entry is surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for sharing and refreshing my memory of the Good Earth novel, Joyce
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