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The Goldilocks Zone

So, all this time, we thought Goldilocks's simple story Was a children's fable, a most innocuous sort Found it is most sophisticated allegory Around which many learned scientists would soon cavort. As the narrative goes, not a complicated plot The porridge bowls Goldilocks found in the three bears' pad Were, to her taste, either much too cold or much too hot Until she tasted the porridge the baby bear had. It seems that astronomers are looking for a place In the cosmos where water stays liquid all year 'round Because a planet humans can inhabit in space Must not be too hot or too cold—"just right" must be found. The scientists are looking for that Goldilocks Zone Just right for the sustainability of human life A planet earth's residents could call their very own And, hopefully, free of interplanetary strife! Written March 17, 2021 For "Goldilocks Zone" Contest Sponsored by Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 3/30/2021 11:19:00 AM
New Concept. I admire. All the best.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/30/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha. It is an interesting concept, which I had not heard of until I started researching for this contest. Hey, we learn something new everyday, right?
Date: 3/24/2021 12:25:00 AM
This is fantastic, and informative. Educational also. I had never heard of this. Good luck in the contest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/24/2021 8:44:00 AM
Confession time. I had to Google it to find out what he was talking about. I had never heard of the Goldilocks Zone either. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/21/2021 6:53:00 AM
Looks like a great poem for the contest. Scientists are finding new exosolar planets within that so-called "goldilocks zone". It's too bad we don't have the ability to reach them in a satisfactory amount of time.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/21/2021 9:19:00 AM
True, Robert, and I think that is a major concern for the future. Of course, we could work very hard to make the earth a more potable place, too. I'd like to see that.
Date: 3/18/2021 11:57:00 AM
A very correct informative poem! Yes, I expect this to score high!! All the best to you in the contest!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/18/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. I can only hope! I appreciate your confidence.
Date: 3/17/2021 8:04:00 PM
WoW!~ Was unaware of that. Very interesting. Well done and good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2021 8:32:00 PM
Hey, Judy. We learn something every day. I wasn't aware of it either until I googled it. I wrote to Anthony, but he didn't give me any help; just said take it any direction I wanted to. I had no idea what "Goldilocks Zone" meant, so I googled it and went from there.
Date: 3/17/2021 5:29:00 PM
Creative 'geniosity,' I say, Milt. Superb contest entry, methinks. Go for that gold! :) gw
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2021 6:55:00 PM
Truth is, this is the worst poem I have written in a long, long time. I hope that makes it a sure winner. What do you think?
Date: 3/17/2021 4:50:00 PM
What a perfect poem for the contest L. Milton. I watch a lot of Nova so I was aware of Goldilocks Zone. I wonder who named it that? I will have to look it up. I think your poem will be high on the winner's list. I loved it! Have a very Happy St. Patrick's Day. Blessings
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2021 6:56:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, a lot. I hope you're right. Have a wonderful St. Patrick's Day!
Date: 3/17/2021 4:04:00 PM
Wonderfully written... So true. We have no idea how truly blessed we are to live on our lovely planet. God is perfect... there is nowhere like here. Have the very nicest day. Ann
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thanks, Ann. This is a most interesting subject. I had to Google to see what the "Goldilocks Zone" is all about. Fascinating!

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