The Golden Scene

Sun above, looking
Thoughtfully at itself in
Immense clear water.

Adds golden sparkle
To the leaves of the palm trees,
On the green island

Which looks like inset
Against the large, vast sea that
Stretches till skyline..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Uche O. Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 10:56 AM
Radical description...... That's poetry for all. Nice one with beautiful images.
Komala Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 10:03 AM
feel the beauty of your golden scene...great work Sadaf..congratulation !!! :) SK
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Beautiful win poem Sadaf, love it. - Congrats!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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July 21, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Sadaf! All are beautiful, but the first haiku is my favorite (love the thoughtful sun). :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Great winning work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
Palmer Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 12:45 PM
great write Sadaf,I felt the rays
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your nice picturing of this island scene.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 12:46 PM
congrats sadaf on a lovely win for this gorgeous painting in words luv..
Gorelick Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 11:44 AM
congrats to you..I love the "sun looking thoughtfully"..,,BG
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:49 PM
A lovely write, Sadaf. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Johnson Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations on a great win with your lovely series of haikus. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Sadaf, congrats on your great win..David
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
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