The Golden Sands of Love

On the golden sands
We share each other
As we make love
With natures scent from the water
Our two souls unite 
Recipe of natures scents mix
Birds start to sing 
Fish leaping to view and rejoice
Clouds bowing 
Waves lap the shore 
With a tenderness of applause
Reeds chatter on the dunes
Driftwood our audience
As all around a gentle breeze
Whistles a rhapsody 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/23/2009 1:19:00 PM
Love the picture represented here. The color golden sand beautiful which means the sky must be golden also. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/4/2009 3:03:00 AM
i love the golden sands of love-and in Malta we have that too-we have a place called Golden sands and its beautiful Captan-yhis write is full of passion,passion on golden sands-beautiful write--charma
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:03:00 PM
I think of the dunes up around Travers City in Michigan. Wherever, a lovely love-making day, lovely poem. daver
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Date: 6/29/2009 10:24:00 AM
Lovely! I applaud you on this romantic and soft piece of poetry friend.
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Date: 6/28/2009 2:02:00 PM
Greetings James. What a great write, I actually witnesses this scene with my minds eye. I now have a question to ask if you don't mind.Could you please tell me which way this line should read within the context of a poem I am working on. "l listened with my heart instead of with my head" or "I listened with my head instead of with my heart" I can't decied which one sounds better. I could sure use your thoughts on this one. I shall then submit it. Thanks, Melody?
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Date: 6/28/2009 12:13:00 PM
A gentle and very vivid poem. Lovely atmosphere and lovely images. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/28/2009 10:00:00 AM
Lovely images that make me think of the Caribbean Islands, especially the video for Jason Mraz's "I'm Lucky" with Colbie Caillat. You make me long for a vacation with a special guy! Love you! Carolyn
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