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The Golden Hour

Gorgeous boy, your skin shines in the sun’s golden hour. Waves of your jet-black hair, short-cropped like Caesar's dripping tendrils on a chiseled brow, wisps beside each ear A bare-chested Apollo cycles in low-slung shorts. Waves of your jet-black hair, short-cropped like Caesar's, my ardeur imagines eyes a molten sapphire blue. A bare-chested Apollo cycles in low-slung shorts, calves taunt, thigh muscles pumping, a true stallion. My ardeur imagines eyes a molten sapphire blue. surely, the night sky is less beautiful than your eyes, Legs with calves taunt, thigh muscles pumping, a stallion, lovely man-child, whose dreams will you soon make true? Surely, the night sky is less beautiful than your eyes. Dripping tendrils on a chiseled brow, wisps beside each ear, lovely man-child, whose dreams will you soon make true? Gorgeous boy, your skin shines in the sun’s golden hour.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2014 8:18:00 AM
wow and wow again Debbie love it it is fantastic how you bring him to life in the mind congrats on being featured lovely write hugs
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:24:00 PM
Quite an intense piece Debbie..
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Date: 8/9/2011 8:34:00 PM
Nice, romantic poem! Keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:44:00 AM
Well done with the Pantoun, Debbie! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my latest. It's my hope that I have found love, but I have been burned before, so it is just hope at the moment. Take care, Caroline.
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:17:00 PM
Very nice pantoum!Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:16:00 PM
I am jealous of this boy!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/9/2011 8:03:00 AM
I was in a meeting two floors up looking down on him in the heat and the late afternoon sun. He did not know anyone was watching him cycling in circles waiting for someone I guess? Beauty of this kind seldom realizes itself ;).
Date: 8/7/2011 7:46:00 PM
this... makes my ovaries quiver some.. difficult form well done, Deb!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/8/2011 4:01:00 PM
did mine!!!

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