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The Gold Leaf Kiss Premiere Contest Winner

She surrenders her all oranges and apples To his crimson basket of throbbing warmth To let her caves dance in a downpour And cloak her snowflakes in wools of love They are like two entwined trees Against an embroidered slice of love-wall Let me fission in scarlet grains She said amidst the scented rains The hands that hold you are writing poetry All my fireflies in a blossoming spree My cheeks soaking up the vapors of your red cells My eyes are closed to retain the kisses The blue green and white flowers From your breath on my pulsating red hair Gustav Klimt once made us immortal In his deathless The Kiss Such gladioli of love rarely bloomed Very few rooms enjoyed such collapse Such gold leaf glitter seldom shone To shape out the lip-locked lovers 4 December, 2017 For Klimt - Poetry Contest sponsored by Anthony Slausen

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Date: 1/7/2018 7:58:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved top win, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/9/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thanks, Line ...
Date: 1/2/2018 5:06:00 AM
Hi Probhir, long time no see! And here I find you with a golden cup. Congratulations. My my but you have grown as a poet. This is an excellent piece and with some brilliant metaphors. Hope you are well my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jannie for the evaluation ...
Date: 12/28/2017 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Your poem is absolutely enchanting!!
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Date: 1/2/2018 5:19:00 AM
Thank you, MIke ...
Date: 12/27/2017 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations in your outstanding First Place with this amazing poem! : )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for liking, Connie ... Luck does visit once in a blue moon ...
Date: 12/26/2017 11:18:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Happy Christmas
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:48:00 AM
Thank you so much ... Happy Christmas to you too ...
Date: 12/26/2017 8:46:00 AM
Yay! Congratulations on your top win! I picked a winner :) Blessings my friend xomo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 8:58:00 AM
Precisely so, my friend ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 12/26/2017 6:43:00 AM
Probir, all that modesty, and you win after all! Congratulations on your top win for this beauty!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend ...
Date: 12/26/2017 12:54:00 AM
Beautiful, Probir, congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, You are never failing ...
Date: 12/25/2017 11:06:00 PM
Congrats, on your first placement in the contest. It is a very grand verse. Greatly creative. James
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, James ...
Date: 12/25/2017 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations! My Favorite remarkable images: "surrendered oranges and apples, fission in scarlet grains,fireflies in a blossoming spree!!! Vapors of your red blood cells! Blue green and white flowers from your breath! Gladioli of love, few rooms enjoyed such calapse " Such a fantastic long list of truly enviable creativity! Triumphant ?? Happy Holiday indeed
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:22:00 AM
Happy Holiday ... Hahaha ... I am glad that you like my poem ... Thank you ...
Date: 12/25/2017 10:38:00 PM
Returning with congratulations for your well deserved trophy win, Probir. The essence of Klimt's painting 'The Kiss' shines in your wondrous words.. ~Susan
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan ... You are always so appreciative ...
Date: 12/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir ... blessings and happy holidays, my friend! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Greg ...
Date: 12/25/2017 10:18:00 PM
A masterpiece honoring a masterpiece!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 8:25:00 AM
I am too short a wordsmith to honour the tallest painter with my craft ... It is your generosity and perceptibility that have accorded the top placement of the poem ... Thank you so much ... I would like to add that I am fond of showing instead of telling ... This is not much liked ... Most readers love luxuriant description ... But in the present poem it has paid nice dividend ... Thanks again ...
Date: 12/25/2017 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/6/2017 7:04:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/26/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine ... Sorry for my belated reply ...
Date: 12/5/2017 5:11:00 PM
Probir, your sensational and enticing imagery compliments Klimt's painting 'The Kiss' wondrously. The spirit of his painting shines in your fantastic depiction. Good luck in the contest my friend!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/6/2017 6:47:00 AM
Yes, I do.. I so adore your poetry my friend and fine art..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/6/2017 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your deeply appreciative comment ... You really love poetry ...
Date: 12/4/2017 8:02:00 PM
Nicely done, Probir, love all the imagery Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 12/4/2017 11:19:00 AM
Positively wonderful! My favourite so far :) My best to you Probir! xomo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Date: 12/4/2017 9:55:00 AM
Well portrayed, Probir, this should place high:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jo ...
Date: 12/4/2017 7:31:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery, my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2017 5:45:00 AM
Before the sensuality of Klimt, mine are below pygmies ! ... Whatever, Thank you for liking ...
Date: 12/4/2017 6:42:00 AM
Well done Probir--The Kiss shines in your words!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/5/2017 5:49:00 AM
yours will soon outshine ! ... Thank you for liking, Vijay ...

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