Premiere Contest WinnerThe Gold Leaf Kiss

She surrenders her all oranges and apples
To his crimson basket of throbbing warmth
To let her caves dance in a downpour
And cloak her snowflakes in wools of love

They are like two entwined trees
Against an embroidered slice of love-wall
Let me fission in scarlet grains
She said amidst the scented rains

The hands that hold you are writing poetry
All my fireflies in a blossoming spree
My cheeks soaking up the vapors of your red cells
My eyes are closed to retain the kisses

The blue green and white flowers
From your breath on my pulsating red hair
Gustav Klimt once made us immortal
In his deathless The Kiss

Such gladioli of love rarely bloomed
Very few rooms enjoyed such collapse
Such gold leaf glitter seldom shone
To shape out the lip-locked lovers


4 December, 2017
For Klimt - Poetry Contest sponsored by 
Anthony Slausen
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Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Congrats on your well deserved top win, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Thanks, Line ...
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January 2, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Hi Probhir, long time no see! And here I find you with a golden cup. Congratulations. My my but you have grown as a poet. This is an excellent piece and with some brilliant metaphors. Hope you are well my friend.
Gupta Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Jannie for the evaluation ...
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December 28, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Your poem is absolutely enchanting!!
Gupta Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, MIke ...
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December 27, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations in your outstanding First Place with this amazing poem! : )
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Thank you so much for liking, Connie ... Luck does visit once in a blue moon ...
Dutta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 11:18 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Happy Christmas
Gupta Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 4:48 AM
Thank you so much ... Happy Christmas to you too ...
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December 26, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Yay! Congratulations on your top win! I picked a winner :) Blessings my friend xomo
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Precisely so, my friend ... Thank you so much ...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Probir, all that modesty, and you win after all! Congratulations on your top win for this beauty!
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Thank you, dear friend ...
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:54 AM
Beautiful, Probir, congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Thank you, Eve, You are never failing ...
Lee Sr. Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:06 PM
Congrats, on your first placement in the contest. It is a very grand verse. Greatly creative. James
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, James ...
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December 25, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Congratulations! My Favorite remarkable images: "surrendered oranges and apples, fission in scarlet grains,fireflies in a blossoming spree!!! Vapors of your red blood cells! Blue green and white flowers from your breath! Gladioli of love, few rooms enjoyed such calapse " Such a fantastic long list of truly enviable creativity! Triumphant ?? Happy Holiday indeed
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Happy Holiday ... Hahaha ... I am glad that you like my poem ... Thank you ...
Ashley Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:38 PM
Returning with congratulations for your well deserved trophy win, Probir. The essence of Klimt's painting 'The Kiss' shines in your wondrous words.. ~Susan
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much, Susan ... You are always so appreciative ...
Barden Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir ... blessings and happy holidays, my friend! :-)
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Greg ...
Bianco Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:18 PM
A masterpiece honoring a masterpiece!
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:25 AM
I am too short a wordsmith to honour the tallest painter with my craft ... It is your generosity and perceptibility that have accorded the top placement of the poem ... Thank you so much ... I would like to add that I am fond of showing instead of telling ... This is not much liked ... Most readers love luxuriant description ... But in the present poem it has paid nice dividend ... Thanks again ...
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December 25, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Congratulations on your great win.
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thank you ...
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December 6, 2017 at 7:04 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, Sunshine ... Sorry for my belated reply ...
Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Probir, your sensational and enticing imagery compliments Klimt's painting 'The Kiss' wondrously. The spirit of his painting shines in your fantastic depiction. Good luck in the contest my friend!
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Yes, I do.. I so adore your poetry my friend and fine art..
Gupta Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, Susan for your deeply appreciative comment ... You really love poetry ...
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Nicely done, Probir, love all the imagery Hugs Eve ~`*
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Positively wonderful! My favourite so far :) My best to you Probir! xomo
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Maureen ...
Daniel Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Well portrayed, Probir, this should place high:)
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Thank you, Jo ...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Gorgeous imagery, my friend!
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:45 AM
Before the sensuality of Klimt, mine are below pygmies ! ... Whatever, Thank you for liking ...
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Well done Probir--The Kiss shines in your words!
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:49 AM
yours will soon outshine ! ... Thank you for liking, Vijay ...
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