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The Godfather - a Godfather Born

A table set for three Permission to be excused A dish of veal served Behind the toilet His revenge is set and planned Back to the table He sits in silence As train passes by, he stands A table for one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/18/2012 11:30:00 PM
Hi, Michael. Just now seeing that you did this one. I have to tell you we really liked it. WE did a blog on some of our rules. It's because you capitalized the lines. We had so many good ones, that is one way we cut a few. So sorry. this was good. I know sometimes I don't place and I wonder why, so that's to let you know. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
couldn't agree more with Tracie, I felt the chill to down my spine for this piece. well done, Michael
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Date: 1/1/2012 11:39:00 AM
I haven't watched this movie, have no idea why lol.. All the best for Andrea's contest Michael, luv Wilma
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Date: 1/1/2012 7:37:00 AM
Relived the movie scene as I read your Michael. Poetically well put my friend. Steve
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Date: 1/1/2012 7:26:00 AM
Oo I chilling write Michael..I ike it very much.. xx
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 1/1/2012 7:39:00 AM
here it is "L" lol thanks Tracie... oxo Michael
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Tracy Edwards
Date: 1/1/2012 7:30:00 AM
Someone stole my L lol Like*

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