The Goddess Uni

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Abstract notions became times relentless state. Embodiment of fantasy is devoured, Unable to control love that should abate. Not just beautiful she's beauty empowered. . Desirable temptress, goddess so ornate. Her alluring sensuality showered. Such regal self-composure, always assert, Her friendly demeanor, ever so alert.

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Emile Pinet

Date: 6/30/2024 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Speaks Volumes! Your poem "The Goddess Uni" has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2024 7:23:00 AM

My mistake; I apologize for the error, my friend.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/7/2024 6:36:00 AM

I didn't write that poem Emile. I wrote the Goddess Uni.