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The God and the Man

A man awaiting the God’s judgement God said, “You’re evil but no atonement” “So am I”, the man said “Will send to hell”, the God said “I lived in hell, can’t repeat punishment” The God thought for a while and announced “I will send you to heaven instead” “You can’t do that” the man said “Why can’t I? the God asked “ Never, in no way it can be envisioned" +++ September 20,2014. Form Limerick Dr. Ram Mehta Contest" No. 13 by P.D.

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Date: 12/22/2013 9:49:00 AM
HA HA HA.........., nice fun enjoyed. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 12/20/2013 7:38:00 AM
Dr.Mehta, even "THE GOD" is crazy in your case.If he takes a decision he has to hold by that.Changing his decision and getting humiliated by an ordinary mortal.very bad!Even "THE GOD" operates without any basis.Very,very bad.hi..hi..hi..just fun my friend. (: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:00:00 AM
Interesting work Ram. Well done on your nice pen!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:12:00 PM
Interesting poem Dr. Ram Mehta and thank you for commenting on my poem "There's forgiveness in a Smile"
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Date: 12/18/2013 1:04:00 PM
- Good one, Dr.Ram :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/18/2013 12:13:00 PM
Nice to goof around a bit. This made me smile, Dr. Ram. Thank you for your comment. Warm greetings!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:30:00 AM
Interesting ideas penned..Soup mail soon..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2013 2:37:00 AM
Dr. Ram it has been a very long time since we spoke, quite a thought provoking poem this one…David
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/18/2013 3:48:00 AM
Yeah, Nice to see you, David

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