Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Limerick

The God and the Man

A man awaiting the God’s judgement
God said, “You’re evil but no atonement”
“So am I”, the man said
“Will send to hell”, the God said
“I lived in hell, can’t repeat punishment”

The God thought for a while and announced
“I will send you to heaven instead”
“You can’t do that” the man said
“Why can’t I? the God asked
“ Never, in no way it can be envisioned"

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September 20,2014.
Form Limerick
Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest" No. 13 by P.D.

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Bl Devnath December 22, 2013 at 9:49 AM HA HA HA.........., nice fun enjoyed. Loved always, my friend, bl

Poet. Undertaker December 20, 2013 at 7:38 AM Dr.Mehta, even "THE GOD" is crazy in your case.If he takes a decision he has to hold by that.Changing his decision and getting humiliated by an ordinary mortal.very bad!Even "THE GOD" operates without any basis.Very,very bad.hi..hi..hi..just fun my friend. (: ) Jenish.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 19, 2013 at 10:00 AM Interesting work Ram. Well done on your nice pen!

Lara Wash December 18, 2013 at 9:12 PM Interesting poem Dr. Ram Mehta and thank you for commenting on my poem "There's forgiveness in a Smile"

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2013 at 1:04 PM - Good one, Dr.Ram :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Datu December 18, 2013 at 12:13 PM Nice to goof around a bit. This made me smile, Dr. Ram. Thank you for your comment. Warm greetings!

Sara Kendrick December 18, 2013 at 9:30 AM Interesting ideas penned..Soup mail soon..Sara

David Williams December 18, 2013 at 2:37 AM Dr. Ram it has been a very long time since we spoke, quite a thought provoking poem this one…David Dr.Ram Mehta December 18, 2013 at 3:48 AM Yeah, Nice to see you, David