The Glowing Wedding Ring

Golden Jubilee-- the wedding ring still glowing like her smiling face their love a full grown tree now trying to touch the blue sky © kash poet ==========000=========== Placement: 2nd; (October 2012) Contest:Tanka-Love and Marriage Sponsor:SandyIvy ===========000===========
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A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Kash,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations, it was one of my favorites in the contest.
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Reminds me of my parents' Golden Jubilee, 2 years ago. Your tanka actually conveys the sweet atmosphere around the whole ceremony! Sweet, sweet memories! Thank you! :) Hanitra
A  Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 9:51 PM
Kash, congrats luv*Siddy
Gasun Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 8:32 PM
My hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Kash! Cheers! love/hugs:) LG
Sweetheart Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 7:45 PM
CONGRATS KASH ON A SUPER WIN LUV .. THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVS FROM U AND KNEW IT WOULD BE ON TOP TOO.
Carrillo Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Kash; this is very beautiful. A golden jubilee. I like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Arowolo Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Excellent piece,Wonderful write,Kash..I love this--their love growing to touch the sky..wonderful golden jubilee...Ride on brother.. Congratulations on your superb win.
Ivy D Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Kash,enjoy your win' Sandy
Collins Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Dear Kash - Thank your for the happy/sad tears. There's such a settled beauty in this one. Kathy
Sefunmi Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:41 AM
A lovely Tanka, I like this so much.
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:24 PM
hey Kash! Thats a very cute Tanka! love it, Omneya
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:05 PM
MIA??>:) hugs!
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:31 AM
I love this Kash. It's a beautiful tanka! Good luck and best wishes always! hugs:)LG
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 8:02 AM
Just revisiting this one, a beauty!
Onclaud Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 1:02 AM
wedding kringgg, kringgg..:) come over, bud!
Falotico Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 5:17 PM
You have a way with words my poet friend. Michael
Williams Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Kash, this says it all, excellent..David
Neels Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:29 AM
ahh this is such a beauty Kash, absolutely love this! You got me smiling with this gem ;)
Susan Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 8:00 AM
very pretty kash, so romantic :) I bet this will place high in the love and marriage tanka contest!
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 4:58 AM
Great one pointing to a marriage that has lasted fifty years..Enjoyed reading ..If for a contest, winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 12:51 AM
awhh, you touched my sentimental side with this endearing piece, kashi... this wins hands down.. did you receive my soupy.. TPS has a new format and i am npw getting tipsy with so many changes.. yayyy!..) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 12:35 AM
THEIR LOVE A FULL GROWN TREE .. SO BEAUTIFUL THE SENTIMENTS IN EACH LINE BUT THE TREE IS AWESOME KASH LUV .. A RARE BEAUTY .
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