The Glitter In Her Eyes

So what exactly was it that sparked my attention? It’s hard to succinctly define; Certainly she is a beautiful lady, And she has a very sharp mind. But, I have witnessed beauty in the female form before; And I have been impressed with many an intelligent girl; There was just something different about her; Something that made her stand out above the rest; Something that mesmerized me; Inspired me; Poured desire inside of me. This should come as no surprise – it was the magic in her eyes! A glitter of excitement with a glimmering of hope; Pulling me closer to her like I was lassoed by a rope. That is, indeed, what set her apart; That is, indeed, what ignited the spark. The glitter in her eyes.
by Joe Flach. Written and posted on 11/4/11 for the "Glow of Glitter" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 4, 2011 at 1:16 PM
* “She Sounds Sooo Amazingly Beautiful & Desirable * My Dear Precious Joe * Certain Woman Have That Unique Quality About Themselves * That Alluring Aura * Magical In The Way That Her Beauty Can Possess Ones Heart * Like A Slice of Heavenly Glitters Cherry Pie * Lovely * Always * Sarah.” *
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November 4, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Enjoyed this creative write very much joe.Best wishes.
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