The Glitch

In the past we said goodbye
now in the future we say hello
trapped in the vortex of time
we found common ground
to meet again
separate worlds
individual lives
time did not erase
a glitch in the matrix
you reappear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 23, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Wow! Have you read "The Celestine Prophecies," Phyl? It explains the reasons why some people reappear over and over again in our lives. A thought-provoking, intelligent write!
Babcock Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 3:14 PM
No I have not read that book but will have to have a look at it. I find it an interesting topic. l will have to get the book and read it. I have tried to leave reading for winter. If I get started I will be reading to much. Need to focus on more writing. love phyl
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October 19, 2016 at 8:26 PM
You say goodbye, I say hello, hello. Ah those matrix glitches make for good poetry. :)
Babcock Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Hello to you too. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Have a lovely weekend.
Horne Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:14 AM
love these sentiments, Phyll. Hope you're well - I have this week off xx
Babcock Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks Jack. Have not been doing a lot of writing. Just can't seem to make my words come out right. Need a boot in the ---. Glad you have some time off.
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October 14, 2016 at 1:46 PM
- Creating new memories - a fresh start - A great poem, Phyllis - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Anne Lise. No snow as yet how about you. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:40 PM
This poem spells enchantment Phyllis. Timing is everything as they say. Lovely! 7 ; )
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October 22, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thanks for your comment Connie. Still without snow so I am smiling. love phyl
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