The Glance

There was this girl who I took in at a glance Would have missed her if not perchance In her early twenties, frail and tall Wearing hand-me-down pinks, near a shopping mall She was looking for someone, perhaps a brother Possibly young and playful and doted by his sister But her eyes were sad And the glance at her made me feel all bad Battered by rocks on a turbulent sea Family fortunes may have sunk to an unfathomable deep Deprived of strong foundations which make a girl walk tall Unable to claw back, crippled by the fall That haunting look still depresses As I see confident girls with swinging bags and long tresses Jauntily skip through the doorways of the mall To shop with carts in the well-stocked hall That look in her eyes had a story to tell Of reading the future from her present life of hell It reflected shock and portrayed loss And a life without hope or sheen or gloss

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Date: 2/24/2016 1:56:00 PM
I've been burned by 'glances'... Good poem!!
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Date: 3/23/2013 12:55:00 PM
Enjoyed this write. A look can say and reveal so much. Well penned. Em :)
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Sumit Majumdar
Date: 3/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/23/2013 9:39:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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Date: 3/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thanks,,but I feel disturbed.
Date: 3/23/2013 9:03:00 AM
The eyes always have a story to tell. Thanks for the read.
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Date: 3/24/2013 5:52:00 AM
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