The Gladiator

Blood mixed with dirt was still moist on the ground
Traces of battle were scattered around
The man entered slowly, a snare on his face
Trying to hide his contempt and disgrace
Announced by the cheers of the people above
Among all the fighters they showed him most love
Never defeated, no matter the foe
With him they all knew they would soon see a show

The man was all muscle, and seven feet tall
Compared to his size, all the guards appeared small
His skin was tanned golden, his eyes piercing green
His hair long and braided and dark with a sheen
His helmet of metal was fitted just so
His sword and his shield had a rich, shiny glow
A belt made of leather protected his waist
His greaves, thick and sturdy and perfectly laced

Suddenly silent, the crowd had grown still
Awaiting arrival, expecting a thrill
And then there was thunder, the roar of the beast
Declaring his entrance, predicting a feast
The man and the lion began in their game
Predator, prey, they both looked the same
They circled and circled and then in a blink
The cat had attacked him, so anxious to drink

They struggled together, the two locked in war
The crowd cheered them on, hoping for gore
And then he was bitten, the wound on his leg
But he would not fumble and he would not beg
He reached for his weapon so close where it lay
He would not accept this would be his last day
And just as the creature had pounced in the air
He killed the great cat with his sword and a prayer

The fighter stood up with his blood dripping down
The steel of his helmet concealing his frown
The great gladiator continued to reign
Another he killed, one more smile he must feign
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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West Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 1:55 AM
I absolutely enjoyed this poem, I was at the arena watching this spectacle, thank you
Salama  Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Thank you so much Mark! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Inman Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 2:02 PM
I've thought a lot about this deep meaningful poem you have produced. First, it is very well written. I love the sparse subtle use of words throughout the piece showing the pain the Gladiator endured in having to kill to stay alive and the disgust he held for himself in remaining alive. Wonderful choice of words for rhymes.
Salama  Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you so much James! I appreciate that you knew my meaning.
Horne Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 1:37 PM
love this great action write, Samia. A sure winner here
Salama  Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Thank you so much jack. I'm glad that you liked it! :)
A   Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Samia, I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD
Salama  Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 6:00 PM
Hi PD, Yes, the rhyming game was a really good category. Thank you very much! :)
May Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 6:32 AM
congrats on your win Samia
Salama  Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. I appreciate it! :)
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:38 AM
A wonderfully well written poem. Congratulations Samia on your high win in my contest. Love, Joyce
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Hi Joyce, Thank you so much for this fantastic placing! I am so glad that you felt it was good enough ...Samia
Taylor Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Samia. Outstanding. Enjoyed. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Hi Ralph, Thank you so very much. I really appreciate it! :)
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Samia. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Thank you very much Carol! :)
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:49 AM
Wonderful tale... a cry for freedom rings... and congrats... Terry
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Hey Terry, Thanks so much! Yes, freedom! :)
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:00 AM
Samia congrats on your win..you should do a re-mix for the choka contest..David
Salama  Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Hey David, Thank you so much. I'm going to take a look at that! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Like the story Samia, well written. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Salama  Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Hi Anne Lise, Thank you very much for your comment and the love! :)
Žilic Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Great wording and great suspense, loved it.
Salama  Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Thank you very much Nikola! :)
Debrosse Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Very suspenseful and drama packed, kept me at the edge of my seat until the last blow. Very well scripted Samia!
Salama  Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Thank you very much Justin! I really appreciate your comment! :)
Debrosse Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Very suspenseful and drama packed, kept me at the edge of my seat until the last blow. Very well scripted Samia!
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