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The Giver

i stare at this blank page in front of me and think i am the only one out of sync living on this narrow plain nothing ever changing everything always the same day in day out everything perfect no worry or dout its summer year round but theres no color just constant sound into the ocean i want to drift my life feels so empty But i have a special gift i have the gift to feel i am told special things they tell me what is really real they tell me of a time where people would beg and steel my gift helps me see i almost see color but im alone because its only me im alone and lost in a perfect world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/2/2012 1:16:00 PM
Nice one, you are making us think about what is perfect.. xoxoxo Laila
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:44:00 AM
Is there a perfect world?????????? Wery good poem ayla. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:42:00 AM
It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Ayla. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol
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