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The Girl With the Lazy Eye

A girl with a lazy eye I spied Made me want to make her my bride But I gave up the chase When I looked at her face She was seeing someone on the side!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/31/2017 4:12:00 PM
ha ha ha that final line is a real cracker Pat:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/1/2017 4:20:00 PM
Are you saying it had a lot of cheese on it??? (I'm not really sure what that means) oh well, anyway thank you so much for commenting. Wait, it's salty? After all these years cracker becomes food for thought!! Go figure......Again, thanks....pat
Date: 5/30/2017 4:31:00 PM
That's hilarious.
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Pat Adams
Date: 6/29/2017 7:39:00 PM
Thanks Dale, Sorry it's been so long I didn't see your comment. I do appreciate it though!!!
Date: 5/29/2017 8:10:00 PM
Oh my! Eye don't c it ;)
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Date: 5/29/2017 8:34:00 PM
Ha...Ha....Funny! :)
Date: 5/29/2017 8:06:00 PM
ha! very funny, roger!
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Pat Adams
Date: 5/29/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thank you! :)

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