The Girl Who Wore a Mask

A girl wore a mask upon her face so none could see The life she lived that had been so full of cruelty Never wanting anyone to gaze upon her scars Like a prisoner the mask had became her bars She would only remove it when none were around It made her life so much easier she had found Only she could see the imperfections she did bear Ridicule from the town people Nor for them to stare One day so late she ran only to trip and fall Losing her mask shocked to be seen by them all She tried to hide her face, as the crowd stood in silence For they had seen not one sign of any kind of violence Terrified now she gazed out into the crowd "Look she's quite a beauty!" someone did say out loud She didn't understand for surely they had lied But you see all her scars she carried them inside The moral to the story is that for all unwanted pain Others may not see our scars but still our shame remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/4/2019 7:26:00 PM
Bravo, great poem; great lesson--one I can certainly use, Brenda! ~ Ashamed of being ashamed (LOL)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:17:00 PM
Lmao! Thank you Gershon lol hope your doing well? You had me laughing so hard at your other comment I pulled s muscle in my neck!;)
Date: 11/4/2019 7:38:00 AM
So true and powerful! I really feel a connection with this one :-) x
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:28:00 AM
Thanks you Elaine yea it was something I had been working on but didn't know quite how to write it then inspiration just hit! Thank you once again!
Date: 11/4/2019 7:12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is a powerful write! applause!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:26:00 AM
Wow thanks so much! That is so nice of you!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 7:05:00 PM
This is mesmerizing storytelling, enjoyed!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thank you so very much John it's greatly appreciated!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 3:18:00 PM
I totally understand...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you I kinda figured that you would! Appreciate the visit!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 2:34:00 AM
Faving this one... It is Such a beauty. I love it. God bless you ~ Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:42:00 AM
Regina thank you for your wonderful comment and the fav I am humbled once more by your words!)
Date: 11/3/2019 1:26:00 AM
I agree most readily with Gordon on this one -- Powerful indeed! Good creative poetry, Brenda. In fondness. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:41:00 AM
Thank you John! And yes we all have scars we don't want seen I just wanted to point it out I guess who knows where my muse wanted to go without actually saying anything I might add! Such a clever bit** is she not!;) warm affections ;)
Date: 11/2/2019 4:39:00 PM
We never need to mask our pain B
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 8:28:00 PM
See TS here I think I must disagree because most don't want to be bothered and no one wants to show how vulnerable a person they can truly be! But the thought was pure I'm sure! Thank you for the read!;)
Date: 11/2/2019 4:13:00 PM
Wow, this was a sit your butt down and don’t move type of write...intense imagery. I absolutely love the flow of this piece. Yes, people can be cruel type of bullies. But majority are those that accept people for their scars. And if I’m not mistaken, we all walk around with scars. Some may be extreme to others based upon the upbringing. But, if you love your scars, there invisible to others!!! INK
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 8:25:00 PM
Well actually it was an inspired write! I was chatting with a new friend( myself shall I say lol) but old wounds kinda opened up and I've wanted to write one like this for awhile but until today I never could! An inspired healing write kinda you might say ! But yes thank you once again for i that but of inspiration one needed!;) hugs!
Date: 11/2/2019 4:08:00 PM
A very powerful and sensitive piece Brenda, if we were all honest we would all admit we've scars that we don't want any to see. A splendid piece that touches us in our inner core!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon always welcome your comments ! And yes we all do , some I think more than others but there is always a scar or pain one doe not want others to see!;)
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