The Girl On the Bus

I climbed the stairs
To the top deck
Then I found a seat
And sat
Then I heard a voice say “hi”
It was soft and gently spoken 
I turned towards the voice
Which emanated from a girl
With the warmest smile
And her red hair ablaze
In the morning sun
And with her head slightly inclined
She said again “hi”
That’s all
Just “hi”
And with that simple word
Came her smiling eyes
Beneath her blazing hair
And a radiant glow
And a feeling came over me
A peaceful warm feeling
As warm as her smile
Then all at once
I felt so at ease
As if I had known her forever
Though I had seen her only once before
And did not think she had seen me
All she said was “hi”  
But her tone spoke volumes
I returned her smile
And tamely said “hello”
I wanted to say so much more
She smiled again
This time with the heat
To match her flaming locks
I needed no words
As with that wondrous smile
All my questions were answered
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Curtis Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:14 AM
Thank you so much Sylvia
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October 7, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Hi Paul.I Love this it is so natural about life and love,yet so descriptive, and I think clever poetry by the way it conveys to the reader.I enjoyed it.Luv June(Sylvia)
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February 26, 2010 at 12:45 AM
Thanks Gary
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February 23, 2010 at 12:49 AM
Thank you all very much Paul
Amero Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 4:18 PM
I love this poem. I really like poems that capture a moment, especially real life moments. Moments that can make an impact. This one could. Congrats on being featured.
Bolton Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Beautiful poem, love the story and we will await teh ending- congrats on the feature
Austin Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 12:00 PM
The girl on the bus? Yes! But then what happened. Good suspense. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Fraser Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
Curtis Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Carol you are very kind
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Paul. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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February 3, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Paul, This is outstanding. I feel as if I were there. You are indeed a fortunate man to have your questions answered so. Always, Will
Shango Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 2:40 PM
It is so wonderful that you will keep all your questions and the answer a secret ... I could feel you being comfortable in your skin, and letting the poem do the work. Great write. Welcome to poetry soup, I am honored to have you as a friend.
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