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The Girl On the Bus

I climbed the stairs To the top deck Then I found a seat And sat Then I heard a voice say “hi” It was soft and gently spoken I turned towards the voice Which emanated from a girl With the warmest smile And her red hair ablaze In the morning sun And with her head slightly inclined She said again “hi” That’s all Just “hi” And with that simple word Came her smiling eyes Beneath her blazing hair And a radiant glow And a feeling came over me A peaceful warm feeling As warm as her smile Then all at once I felt so at ease As if I had known her forever Though I had seen her only once before And did not think she had seen me All she said was “hi” But her tone spoke volumes I returned her smile And tamely said “hello” I wanted to say so much more She smiled again This time with the heat To match her flaming locks I needed no words As with that wondrous smile All my questions were answered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 3:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Sylvia
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Date: 10/7/2010 4:34:00 PM
Hi Paul.I Love this it is so natural about life and love,yet so descriptive, and I think clever poetry by the way it conveys to the reader.I enjoyed it.Luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 2/26/2010 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Gary
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Date: 2/23/2010 12:49:00 AM
Thank you all very much Paul
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:18:00 PM
I love this poem. I really like poems that capture a moment, especially real life moments. Moments that can make an impact. This one could. Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem, love the story and we will await teh ending- congrats on the feature
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Date: 2/22/2010 12:00:00 PM
The girl on the bus? Yes! But then what happened. Good suspense. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:14:00 AM
Many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Carol you are very kind
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Paul. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 12:14:00 AM
Paul, This is outstanding. I feel as if I were there. You are indeed a fortunate man to have your questions answered so. Always, Will
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Date: 2/2/2010 2:40:00 PM
It is so wonderful that you will keep all your questions and the answer a secret ... I could feel you being comfortable in your skin, and letting the poem do the work. Great write. Welcome to poetry soup, I am honored to have you as a friend.
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