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The Girl In the Flame Red Dress

In a forest clearing Floats a long haired girl Flame red dress In this misty world At her fingertips A fairy so white In this misty clearing Shining so bright A small deer Walks with her As if to turn To confirm she's there In the morning i wake From my slumbering sleep I open my tent As if to seek Will i see, a long haired girl Floating along, wearing a flame red dress Or was i in another world I can only guess http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 3:02:00 PM
Just watched a old movie on the TV called "The Girl In The Red Dress". It was a comedy. I had given some thought about going in the direction of a poem. I see that you had the same thought all the way across the sea. Love your version. Sara
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