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The Girl In the Flame Red Dress

In a forest clearing
Floats a long haired girl
Flame red dress
In this misty world
 
At her fingertips
A fairy so white
In this misty clearing
Shining so bright
 
A small deer 
Walks with her
As if to turn
To confirm she's there
 
In the morning i wake
From my slumbering sleep
I open my tent
As if to seek
 
Will i see, a long haired girl
Floating along, wearing a flame red dress
Or was i in another world
I can only guess


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 3:02:00 PM
Just watched a old movie on the TV called "The Girl In The Red Dress". It was a comedy. I had given some thought about going in the direction of a poem. I see that you had the same thought all the way across the sea. Love your version. Sara
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