The Girl I Seen On the Beach

My day started
With a walk on the sands
As my wish comes true
To grace these American lands
 
As i soak up the heat
That rains down on thee
Some one catches my eye
As i look up and see
 
The bronzed tan
Of a maiden so fair
Pleats of gold
As i politely stare
 
She exits the water
Now with towel in hand
A sight to behold
For many a man
 
To watch her rhythm
Hips dancing
My heart flutters
Like horses prancing
 
Her body to me 
Sheer ecstasy
Curved and cute
This beautiful look
 
Bikini clad girl
In colour's of delight
Her body carries
Shapely and right
 
As this Highlander
Lost for speech
Will always remember
The girl he seen on the beach


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/26/2009 10:53:00 AM
wow this is really good =] thanks for reading my poems and commenting
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Date: 6/24/2009 3:41:00 AM
Wow,very sweet and lovely.one thing i have learnt from you is that you find beautiful people at the beach
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Date: 6/21/2009 2:47:00 AM
James, I'm glad you wrote this poem. Before I was obese, I used to walk on the beach. I hated all of the stares and whistles. Now, from your heart, I find relief that they were not all lust. THANK YOU! I'm going to close, noe, and write a beach story of a different flavor... The Three Bares. It's a true story, too. Be Back Soon. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/20/2009 11:21:00 PM
AWWWWW!!!! This is lovely......Thats why u are my favourite!!!.........This girl must have been nicer than Venus....Damn U make me feel Jealous of her!!!..............Brialliant buddy! Simple yet sophisticatin'......> Crystal
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Date: 6/20/2009 5:42:00 PM
I like! Reminds me of some similar memories. You have a way of reaching into the mind and titilating the romantic and addressing lust so politely. Thank you... <><
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:46:00 PM
I got excited just reading this poem,James. I want you to know I wear a pace maker. Agghhh! This is it, Elizabeth! daver
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:13:00 PM
Love this one James<33 I always fynd Them on the beach too=) Hott muscular bods gone for a swim and a time for Me to show my stuff.. If i have any :s Terrif Write
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:11:00 PM
What a romantic image you paint of this girl carrying her towel. "My heart flutters" as I read your sweet words. She's waiting for you on the sand; go to her now and watch the rhythm in her eyes dance! Love, Carolyn
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