James Fraser Poet Rhyme

The Girl I Seen On the Beach

My day started
With a walk on the sands
As my wish comes true
To grace these American lands
 
As i soak up the heat
That rains down on thee
Some one catches my eye
As i look up and see
 
The bronzed tan
Of a maiden so fair
Pleats of gold
As i politely stare
 
She exits the water
Now with towel in hand
A sight to behold
For many a man
 
To watch her rhythm
Hips dancing
My heart flutters
Like horses prancing
 
Her body to me 
Sheer ecstasy
Curved and cute
This beautiful look
 
Bikini clad girl
In colour's of delight
Her body carries
Shapely and right
 
As this Highlander
Lost for speech
Will always remember
The girl he seen on the beach


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Erica Buckner June 26, 2009 at 10:53 AM wow this is really good =] thanks for reading my poems and commenting

Miranda Agnes Quainoo June 24, 2009 at 3:41 AM Wow,very sweet and lovely.one thing i have learnt from you is that you find beautiful people at the beach

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 21, 2009 at 2:47 AM James, I'm glad you wrote this poem. Before I was obese, I used to walk on the beach. I hated all of the stares and whistles. Now, from your heart, I find relief that they were not all lust. THANK YOU! I'm going to close, noe, and write a beach story of a different flavor... The Three Bares. It's a true story, too. Be Back Soon. Lovingly, Dane

Zoe Lambert June 20, 2009 at 11:21 PM AWWWWW!!!! This is lovely......Thats why u are my favourite!!!.........This girl must have been nicer than Venus....Damn U make me feel Jealous of her!!!..............Brialliant buddy! Simple yet sophisticatin'......> Crystal

Jim Fish June 20, 2009 at 5:42 PM I like! Reminds me of some similar memories. You have a way of reaching into the mind and titilating the romantic and addressing lust so politely. Thank you... <><

Daver Austin June 20, 2009 at 1:46 PM I got excited just reading this poem,James. I want you to know I wear a pace maker. Agghhh! This is it, Elizabeth! daver

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 20, 2009 at 1:13 PM Love this one James<33 I always fynd Them on the beach too=) Hott muscular bods gone for a swim and a time for Me to show my stuff.. If i have any :s Terrif Write

Carolyn Devonshire June 20, 2009 at 1:11 PM What a romantic image you paint of this girl carrying her towel. "My heart flutters" as I read your sweet words. She's waiting for you on the sand; go to her now and watch the rhythm in her eyes dance! Love, Carolyn