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The Girl Before Me

i can't move on if everytime i look at you i see her i can't forgive you if everytime we lay together i feel her

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Date: 3/10/2017 4:50:00 AM
That is a great first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome here :) It's sad, heartfelt and very strong too.
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Date: 3/8/2017 8:41:00 PM
Short, direct and powerful
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Entiele Caufield
Date: 3/10/2017 12:17:00 AM
thanks!

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