The Girl Before Me

i can't move on if everytime
i look at you
i see her
i can't forgive you if everytime
we lay together
i feel her
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Agustin Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 11:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
White Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 4:50 AM
That is a great first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome here :) It's sad, heartfelt and very strong too.
Irwin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Short, direct and powerful
Caufield Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 12:17 AM
thanks!
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