The Girl Acrossthe Lawn

I look upon the girl across the lawn                                                                                                Who looks like you                                                                                                                                              And my day has gone to dreams                                                                                                          Only to find your face in the clouds                                                                                                                 Has pushed the sun away
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April 6, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Michael, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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March 25, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Michael, you write very well - you've posted several good poems. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and write your comment at other "poets' poems and you will get back. - (Give to get) - We are many in this "family" always nice with even more members. - Wishing you a lovely Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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March 22, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Hello Michael Ainsley, , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "This contest is only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
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