Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

The Giraffe

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                                             Giraffe long thick neck
                                                            Strong muscles varied uses..
                                                                                    Battle ready males

Contest:"One Haiku Contest"
Sponsor:^Rick Parise

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James Foulk June 30, 2011 at 2:06 PM a great Haiku, and congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 27, 2011 at 11:03 AM Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Jack Horne June 26, 2011 at 10:10 AM Lovely write. Many congrats, Sara : )

Elaine George June 26, 2011 at 1:13 AM Vivid images conveyed in this Haiku, Sara. Many congrats on your win. Lainie

James Fraser June 25, 2011 at 7:43 AM Quite an animal the Giraffe Sara. They are related to deer, cattle and other even toed ugulates. But indeed a species in their own right. Fine Haiku, I like it. Congrats in the contest. Have a lovely weekend :)

Debbie Guzzi June 25, 2011 at 5:59 AM lines 1 & 2 ok line 3 is not a cut....you have only 1 part you need 2 parts have line 3 give someother sensory input & no capitals or title Sara giraffe long thick neck/ muscles battle ready/ distant roar [something like that let the reader have another sensory clue of the scene] then you'd have 2 parts

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 24, 2011 at 11:39 PM Congrats for being in the winners' circle for this wonderful write on giraffes, very unique, Sara :) and I hope that all is well with you, your hubby and Tommy Jr. :) God bless!

Nette Onclaud June 24, 2011 at 10:27 PM love the imagery, sara.. another crown of a poem from you … perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2011 at 9:18 PM Congratulations, Sara, with this interesting image of the giraffe! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 24, 2011 at 6:54 PM Congrats Sara on your HM in the contest my friend with this beautiful write luv..awesome honor luv..

Michael J. Falotico June 24, 2011 at 2:29 PM Excellent Haiku Sara.... Perfect my dear...luv Micahel

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. June 24, 2011 at 2:22 PM Nice. Much enjoyed. Love Haikus so much, but are not very good at doing them myself. Haikus are one of my favorite forms. Thanks for commenting on my Quatrain too.