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The Gilded Mountain Sea

I look across the windswept canyons, see the blazing trees. A gold and russet ocean swells beneath the autumn breeze. It surges as the highest tide to reach the mountain tops. An endless wave of beauty rushing on, it never stops. And in the sky of tangerine, its gulls are birds that glide across this sea of fantasy into the eventide. The disappearing flock of geese and waning sun imbue nostalgia that engulfs the soul enraptured by the view. My valley home, like ocean’s strip of shore, now calls to me, a voyager who must depart from gilded mountain sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/3/2013 3:12:00 AM
Well ,,, looks like I came back to read again,, AWESOME ;} how are you Andrea ?
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Date: 7/8/2013 12:16:00 AM
Wow, this has some nice lines in it,,,, My valley home, like ocean’s strip of shore, now calls to me, thank you for liking my Irony ;} nice win.
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#199" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2012 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your FIRST WIN, Andrea! Thanks again for dropping by and reading my poem.
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:33:00 PM
Just lovely. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:39:00 PM
Excellent write!! Congratulations friend Andrea!! you deserve to win :) **Maria**
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:24:00 PM
Andrea, congrats in Brian's contest... xox~pd
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Date: 8/25/2012 4:29:00 PM
wow i remember this, deserved winner, congrats.
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:31:00 AM
Again, another win for a stunning poem...... Congratulations... Terry
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:57:00 AM
Wow!!! I love it. A wonderful couplet deserved to be the GRAND WINNER! CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR!!!!!
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:33:00 AM
Simply beautiful and beautifully simple. Thanks for painting such a nice picture of words. Joe
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this!
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:20:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea...very nice poem
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Date: 4/1/2012 1:14:00 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Glistening Thoughts" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2012 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:01:00 PM
pure poetic delight, andie... congrats all the way with my huggs! :)
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:01:00 PM
congrats Andrea on an HM for this exceptional entry for Rick on glistening thoughts luv..
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful images evoked. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/31/2012 4:57:00 AM
Andrea....scintllating imagery and clever use of contrast ........you was robbed....."dishonorable mention" should have been either #1 #2 or #3......a pleasure to read your stuff......best wishes
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:05:00 AM
What awesome imagery in this lovely entry Andie. I love it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Connie
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Date: 3/30/2012 11:03:00 PM
Ahhh!! What a breath-taking picture you have painted Andrea!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Big Huggsss my friend,love~deb
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Date: 3/25/2012 8:18:00 PM
blazing trees... sky of tangerine... wonderful couplet you have here Andrea, it kind a make me feel i've stepped into a realm of fantasy. good luck on the contest
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Date: 3/25/2012 2:43:00 PM
So enjoyed your glistening vista as described here Andrea Best of fortune in the contest..)
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:46:00 PM
The contrasting of canyons and oceans is wonderful! This is a joy to read. - Chuck
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