The Gilded Mountain Sea

I look across the windswept canyons, see the blazing trees. A gold and russet ocean swells beneath the autumn breeze. It surges as the highest tide to reach the mountain tops. An endless wave of beauty rushing on, it never stops. And in the sky of tangerine, its gulls are birds that glide across this sea of fantasy into the eventide. The disappearing flock of geese and waning sun imbue nostalgia that engulfs the soul enraptured by the view. My valley home, like ocean’s strip of shore, now calls to me, a voyager who must depart from gilded mountain sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 3:12 AM
Well ,,, looks like I came back to read again,, AWESOME ;} how are you Andrea ?
Duncan Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:16 AM
Wow, this has some nice lines in it,,,, My valley home, like ocean’s strip of shore, now calls to me, thank you for liking my Irony ;} nice win.
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#199" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations on your FIRST WIN, Andrea! Thanks again for dropping by and reading my poem.
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Just lovely. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Liwayway Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:39 PM
Excellent write!! Congratulations friend Andrea!! you deserve to win :) **Maria**
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August 25, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Andrea, congrats in Brian's contest... xox~pd
Horsman Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 4:29 PM
wow i remember this, deserved winner, congrats.
O'Leary Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Again, another win for a stunning poem...... Congratulations... Terry
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Wow!!! I love it. A wonderful couplet deserved to be the GRAND WINNER! CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR!!!!!
Flach Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Simply beautiful and beautifully simple. Thanks for painting such a nice picture of words. Joe
Sefunmi Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:42 AM
Congrats on your win
Sefunmi Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:41 AM
I enjoyed reading this!
May Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 9:20 AM
congrats on your win Andrea...very nice poem
Brown Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 1:14 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Glistening Thoughts" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:01 PM
congrats Andrea on an HM for this exceptional entry for Rick on glistening thoughts luv..
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:01 PM
pure poetic delight, andie... congrats all the way with my huggs! :)
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Beautiful images evoked. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
Beck Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 4:57 AM
Andrea....scintllating imagery and clever use of contrast ........you was robbed....."dishonorable mention" should have been either #1 #2 or #3......a pleasure to read your stuff......best wishes
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:05 AM
What awesome imagery in this lovely entry Andie. I love it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Connie
Burch Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 11:03 PM
Ahhh!! What a breath-taking picture you have painted Andrea!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Big Huggsss my friend,love~deb
. Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 8:18 PM
blazing trees... sky of tangerine... wonderful couplet you have here Andrea, it kind a make me feel i've stepped into a realm of fantasy. good luck on the contest
Maverick Avatar
March 25, 2012 at 2:43 PM
So enjoyed your glistening vista as described here Andrea Best of fortune in the contest..)
Novotny Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 5:46 PM
The contrasting of canyons and oceans is wonderful! This is a joy to read. - Chuck
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