The Gifts of Creation

As I sadly left the greenery of mountain side and verdant valley,
a gift of three was given to me,three pairs of animals wild and free.
The first couple to cross my worn path were two crows upon the grass.
Their squawking antics bringing mirth a mated pair upon God’s earth.

The second pair two chestnut deer, no antlers marked there passage here
Adventure’s lure the gentle hart, Sir Gawain’s companions at Camelot’s start.
Last to appear from the Lord of love A pair of Cardinals red as blood.
to show me balance is what I need, to connect the spirit with the deed.

For sky and earth and sea, I shall praise Lord God the Almighty,
for all the bounty given me, I shall praise the Lord God Almighty.
For fire and metal, gifted free, I shall praise Lord God the Almighty,
for all the bounty given me, I shall praise our Lord and God Almighty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/27/2018 9:44:00 AM
Nice tribute to the wonders of creation! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:19:00 AM
DEBBIE... ANOTHER WONDERFUL WIN... A GLORIOUS POEM..PD
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:41:00 AM
Congrats my sweet friend on your win, loved, bl
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Date: 1/24/2012 3:15:00 AM
Lovely!Congrats Debbie :)!!
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:54:00 PM
congrats Debbie on a sensational win for this wonderful entry for Brian.. luv..
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:43:00 PM
Loved the metaphors, how they blended in so well. For all things...Praise ye the Lord !! .....and congrats on your winning spot in the contest !!
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's latest contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 8:15:00 AM
A metaphorical Masterpiece. Walk peacefully on God's earth. SIMPLY BRILLIANT! Deb. Many congrats on your SENSATIONAL WIN. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Debbie in John Moses Freeman's contest "Praises of Life Precept". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:41:00 PM
This is one of the best poems of this day Deb. Loved it and a fav for sure.many many congratulations for this super win.
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win in this contest
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:59:00 PM
jubilant, debs.. happy to be in the company of a great talent like you for this slot... THUMBS UP!! :) huggs!
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:31:00 PM
I want to sing this one!! Lovely...lovely!!!
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Date: 4/9/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on another first place win ..this time in John's contest .. with this lovely creation my friend.. enjoy another top spot luv..
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:27:00 AM
Wonderful entry, Debbie! Congrats on your 1st place win! Ellen
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:12:00 AM
Many congrats on your win with this great poem : ) Jack
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:22:00 AM
This is indeed a terrific inspirational poem, Deb. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Debbie
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:04:00 AM
Lovely song of praise. Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2009 3:55:00 AM
I like your poem about nature. I did not receive the same education that some people did or was absent when it was taught but I like your use of other writer's ideas. I looked after my grandson when he was an infant while his parents worked. He was so special to me. He has an inherited disease and it causes him to do things that normal people would not. I guess that I need say more. I wish that I could rock him and make it better but can't. Sara
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Date: 6/20/2009 4:30:00 PM
I love your quatrains, Deborah, write more of those for me. I love nature, it is the innocence of innocent perception. Love too, to you!
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:35:00 AM
I simply Loved all of this how beautiful ... Jayne
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Date: 6/14/2009 5:40:00 PM
Deborah, Your words flow freely and with good rhyme. You're right about balance. A good dose of God's words help balance even the most difficult life. Take care, friend. Lovingly, Dane
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