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The Gift That I Give You

A genuine word bouquet~ the gift I give you today Embroidered in chapters of benevolent language Bound in book of life, memories fondly resonate, Ornate in blossoms of passion heartbeats convey, This gift I give you today, a genuine word bouquet, Serenading our union says: I will love you always; As candles of your affection within my heart glow Worshipping life’s covenants we wrote long ago Affirming those bonds still remain true and strong Where bells of compassion in rhythms of love toll, Wrapped in this uxorious gift are promises forever Beaming glint of contentment in blessings eternal Conferring everlasting upon goodness of evermore Invoking feelings grandeur from halo of my soul Strumming eloquence in oratory of requited love Enamored in its presence, cajoling at its behest, This gift I give you today, a genuine word bouquet, Serenading our union says: I will love you always. July 2, 2021 The gift that I give you poetry contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Valsa George

Date: 11/28/2021 7:51:00 AM

What a great Boquet of words you have gifted to the one you hold close to your heart, emanating beauty and scent alike. It is more precious than the perfumes of Arabia or the diamonds of Botswana. Beautiful. It is always a pleaure reading your poems Vijay!

Ann Peck

Date: 7/29/2021 9:35:00 AM

What a beautiful gift! "Worshipping life's covenants we wrote long ago." I love that especially.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2021 5:34:00 PM

A genuine word bouquet, indeed! Your tender expression is exquisite and your imagery is enrapturing, Vijay. Lucky is the lovely lady to receive such an elegant gift. Congratulations for your excellent win in the contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/23/2021 11:12:00 AM

What an exquisite gift!! Eloquent poetic language!!

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/20/2021 11:16:00 PM

What true poetries should look like, always a treat to read, and congrats, Vijay, to see your poem among the top.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 7/20/2021 2:14:00 PM

Beautiful piece! Congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2021 5:46:00 AM

Not surprising that this exquisite piece is a winner, congrats my friend. I enjoyed rereading this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2021 12:25:00 PM

Very well done and Congrats to you for your win in this contest, Vijay.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/7/2021 11:32:00 AM

Your writing is always a precious gift to me. Don't ever forget that Vijay , thank you :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I see congratulations are in order because of this fantastic write! I enjoyed everything about it from start to finish. The content was very good. Congrats on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2021 8:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/7/2021 8:00:00 AM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Vijay. Lovely, expressive figurative language! Janice

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/7/2021 12:00:00 AM

A beautiful bouquet of loving words Vijay, what a gift this is. Congratulations on a worthy win, truly deserved… Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/7/2021 6:11:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Belle. Many thanks.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/6/2021 10:37:00 PM

Vijay congrats on your win! a superb gift. For me your poems are also a gift of vocabulary, because I learn new words- Uxorious , for instance!! excellent work!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/7/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Krish. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/6/2021 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/7/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 7/6/2021 11:27:00 AM

Vijay, So very beautiful. What a loving embrace of your word bouquet. It is such a gift to read your loving thoughts. As candles of your affection within my heart glow Worshipping life’s covenants we wrote long ago Truly... a fav of mine to read and read again. What a lucky woman. Blessings to you, Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/7/2021 6:10:00 AM

Honored by your visit and lovely comments Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/4/2021 3:25:00 PM

Vijay, What a fine lesson in love in your 'Gift you gave'. Left me to ponder your 'word bouquet' thoughts in full bloom. Even smiling to learn the meaning of 'uxorious'. Happy Sunday wishes to you and yours. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:37:00 PM

Happy Sunday to you too, Richard. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. Uxorious seemed to fit nicely in this poem.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/4/2021 6:59:00 AM

I once wrote about words and the power they wield. They can cure or they can kill. They can wound or they can heal. You give your beloved a bouquet of words. Excellent. Love it. God Bless and good luck n the contest. JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:36:00 PM

You are right Judy. Many thanks for your kind remarks. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/4/2021 4:42:00 AM

What an exquisite thought Vijay, a Word Bouquet! Just beautiful. My favorite part is "the candles of your affection", perfectly poetic and sure to do very well in the contest. Happy Sunday!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:35:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind feedback Mike. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/4/2021 2:17:00 AM

A bouquet of words, what a lovely idea....Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Delice.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/3/2021 11:53:00 AM

Lovely gift...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2021 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Pashang.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/2/2021 10:00:00 PM

"A genuine word bouquet wrapped in love" ... Is the best gift one could ever receive. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2021 6:24:00 AM

Thank you my friend--always a treat to read your comments. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/2/2021 3:23:00 PM

this is indeed a gift. All the best in the contest Vijay. Blessings Rick.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2021 6:23:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Richard. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/2/2021 10:48:00 AM

The most lovely poem I have read today is a fave engraved deep inside the riches of a loving heart, on display in sweet words yet hidden in magnificent wording! An actual definition of beauty, dear Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2021 6:23:00 AM

Thant is so very kind of you Lasaad. Much appreciate your kind remarks. many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/2/2021 10:31:00 AM

A beautifully written loving poem Vijay. Very special :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/3/2021 6:22:00 AM

Much appreciate Heidi. Many thanks for your support.