The Gift of This Eve

One enchanted evening
I followed Luna’s moon,
as She guided my ship
to a secret lagoon.

In a golden ocean
buffed to a mirror sheen,
I spied the sexiest
mermaid I'd ever seen.

She flaunts ebony hair
befitting, a true Queen,
offset by a sweeping
tail of aquamarine.

Anchored in the shallows
I waded to the shore,
and evoked the magic
that would open love's door.

Under a full March moon
she steps from fantasy,
and rises from the sea
to make sweet love to me.

Sharing this special night
I know that she must leave,
and I’m to be content
with the gift of this eve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Love the mermaid. Bravo on the great imagery and descriptions. Lovely, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Sage Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:05 PM
well written Emile....you should probably return to that spot next eve...excellent write
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thanks White Sage, I appreciate it. Emile.
Raha Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:49 AM
such a calm and serene setting of this majestic act of love,Beautiful Sir Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Miraj, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Lane Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Great image to go along with this sexy tail of a tale. How could you resist with her beckoning to you like that? Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Emile, this is so wonderful. The imagery you portray is perfect. I love the flow you carry and the message you send..Very well written...:) *smiles* -luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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